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《当小和尚遇见老虎》
云南袁江
童生


Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 06:40:18    Post subject: 《当小和尚遇见老虎》 Reply with quote

[size=24]当小和尚遇见老虎


失措茫然的小和尚,
回头再看小姑娘。
师父说她是老虎,
老虎就是山大王。

师父说老虎会吃人,
血盆大口牙齿长。
可是看那小姑娘,
一双眼睛水汪汪--

走起路来像蝴蝶,
说话声音像铃铛;
小小嘴巴像花瓣,
牙像白米带亮光。

原来老虎不可怕,
师父说话太夸张;
这个老虎真可爱,
不怕山高来上香!



后记:
中午上网,点开接龙。临屏即兴,天助诗成。
正想贴出,已经有人。和平岛主,捷足先登。
老虎可爱,诗歌传神。改贴此处,敬请批评![/size]
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赵福治
探花


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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 16:03:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

流畅,形象。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 18:32:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

想起一首歌 Very Happy
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