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戏作，与nobody

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-11 04:08:02 Post subject: 戏作，与nobody

戏作，与nobody 我正出神地欣赏美术上的最后的晚餐你就来了电话说我们的主，耶稣，遭难 Nobody，你这迟到千年的电话让我恨透了所有的木头连未来的钉子都投进火炉一盆沙漠上的植物突然开花了我说我要徒步去你家附近的教堂和你一起聆听福音书你欢欣地答应你说你要隆重地迎我在十年前教堂的门口 2007-12-11 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-11 05:00:47 Post subject:

。来看看朋友的佳作：）回头再细细品赏。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-12-11 05:44:45 Post subject:

说什么暗语～

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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:42:00 Post subject:

好文笔

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Posted: 2007-12-11 11:27:36 Post subject:

这么快，哈哈。很好。是象暗语。也暗合信仰在很多人心目中的隐秘性吧。我回头再写，现在写程序呢！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-11 16:21:47 Post subject:

有点像 <<达.芬奇密码>>...

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Posted: 2007-12-11 19:50:42 Post subject:

没有那么复杂，字面理解就行了。交待一句：nobody是基督的信徒。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-11 19:57:10 Post subject:

哈哈，搞得像地下党似的。我们这个坛子里很多人都是啊。在北美是主流宗教，绝大部分人，至少宣称，自己是基督徒吧。到处都是教堂，肯定比中国的证券交易所多，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-11 20:12:47 Post subject:

你说你要隆重地迎我在十年前教堂的门口 ——nobody这句话引发我的灵感，速成这首小诗。你想，多么感动人，为了迎接我，他要提前十年站在教堂门口等我（也就是说他现在已经站了九年了），何等的真情。虽然无理，荒诞，但有意思阿。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-11 20:24:22 Post subject:

_________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-11 20:48:27 Post subject:

没有一个基督徒能严格按照神的话去做。都只是五十步与百步之分。所以神说，这世界上没有义人，一个都没有。好在，我们是因信称义，不是因行为称义。信的标志之一，就是能时时忏悔，也就算合格了。作为一个集体的忏悔，我们常彼此提醒： “世上最坏，就是基督徒。因为他们明知有错，却还去做。” _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-11 21:23:21 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

没有一个基督徒能严格按照神的话去做。都只是五十步与百步之分。所以神说，这世界上没有义人，一个都没有。
好在，我们是因信称义，不是因行为称义。
信的标志之一，就是能时时忏悔，也就算合格了。

作为一个集体的忏悔，我们常彼此提醒：
“世上最坏，就是基督徒。因为他们明知有错，却还去做。”

哈, 人们最怕承认的错误就是虚伪. 而承认虚伪又是更大的虚伪, 所以真正的虚伪还是不承认的好. 基督徒的可爱之处到是敢承认真实. 继续认错,继续作错.

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Posted: 2007-12-11 21:37:30 Post subject:

你的逻辑真不错，看得有点蒙了。会的。那将会是新生！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-11 21:51:03 Post subject:

耶和华，我的神，你看他们为真理而争斗不休，他们都是很坦诚的孩子，虽然玷污我为您而设的殿堂，但也请您谅解他们的罪过，他们是借地说话的可怜的生命。阿门！！ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-11 21:52:34 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

耶和华，我的神，你看他们为真理而争斗不休，他们都是很坦诚的孩子，虽然玷污我为您而设的殿堂，但也请您谅解他们的罪过，他们是借地说话的可怜的生命。阿门！！

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