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再来个同题，有梅无花《枯梅》

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-08 09:09:19 Post subject: 再来个同题，有梅无花《枯梅》

《枯梅》时间的风削去肉暴露出站立的灵魂一种持续的姿态伸向天空和泥土掏出谁的内心向整个季节展示我闭了双眼那深深的裂痕又是另一种语言剥开一种古老的力量让我泪流满面

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Posted: 2007-12-08 09:58:27 Post subject:

原本挺感人的诗歌, 被你几个笑脸娃娃笑晕了

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-08 17:41:05 Post subject:

我也很感动了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-08 22:06:39 Post subject:

哈哈！！

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Posted: 2007-12-08 22:34:55 Post subject:

是啊，那几个笑脸不该放前面的！

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-12-09 01:50:14 Post subject:

哈哈那很不相称~~~ _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-09 02:34:20 Post subject:

子花，你该放个沉痛点的笑脸，那样我们的情绪就能和你的诗歌一致了～

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-09 08:07:56 Post subject:

子花, 我突然想明白了. 那些笑脸是新开的子(梅)花呵 ___诗歌诗歌 ____诗歌诗 _____诗歌诗歌 ____哈哈哈 ___BLAAA _____水水水土土土土土土土土土土土土土土

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:35:04 Post subject:

反应那么激烈！就像在家长面前犯事了一样！！我赶紧弄了它！免得大家没心情评论诗歌了！！一来就想到各位诗人会别扭~！给大家开个玩笑呵呵

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:38:13 Post subject:

别, 我早晨费了半天劲才画的树你一改我就白画了

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:41:06 Post subject:

都是枯的，花上也没用呀！白水让你辛苦了！！给你加点糖~~

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