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《雪后访大河村遗址》

萨福
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Posted: 2006-12-11 22:22:29 Post subject: 《雪后访大河村遗址》

雪后的大河已失滔滔不见大雁南飞的踪影，我哭啊！一个在城市迷路的女人鱼开始眠于水底，岸上渔夫忙碌着织补春天的网南岸的村子里，母亲不停耕种，她收获的小麦种子如今落在男人手中红色的陶罐盛满浆果，孩子们奔跑在森林里，还有那些花儿还有那些草儿那些野兽那些飞禽，却在越来越锋利的武器下奄奄一息，土地上的土越来越少我哭啊，一个在城市迷路的女人

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-12 00:17:32 Post subject:

一个在城市迷路的女人她的眼里，看到的此情此景她还有什么？令人感动和震撼的诗歌 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

萨福
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Posted: 2006-12-13 19:58:43 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

一个在城市迷路的女人
她的眼里，看到的此情此景
她还有什么？

令人感动和震撼的诗歌

谢谢和平岛,作版主真不容易,再烂的诗也要读也要回,嘿嘿....

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-14 21:19:27 Post subject:

萨福 wrote:

和平岛 wrote:

一个在城市迷路的女人
她的眼里，看到的此情此景
她还有什么？

令人感动和震撼的诗歌

谢谢和平岛,作版主真不容易,再烂的诗也要读也要回,嘿嘿....

你的诗歌很有质感的
非一日之功呀
Very Happy

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kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-14 23:16:18 Post subject: Re: 《雪后访大河村遗址》

萨福 wrote:

鱼开始眠于水底，岸上
渔夫忙碌着织补春天的网

南岸的村子里，母亲
不停耕种，她收获的小麦种子
如今落在男人手中

．．．

那些野兽那些飞禽，却在越来越锋利的武器下
奄奄一息，土地上的土越来越少

我哭啊，一个在城市迷路的女人

精彩的文字　　成熟的诗风　特别的切入面！

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和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-14 23:22:15 Post subject:

愈读愈喜欢的诗歌 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

杨光
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Posted: 2006-12-14 23:49:40 Post subject:

我哭啊！一个在城市迷路的女人铺垫基础上的情感宣泄,感人的 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

孙慧峰
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Posted: 2006-12-15 02:28:59 Post subject:

情感深挚的诗歌~

左岸
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Posted: 2006-12-17 19:38:58 Post subject:

吟唱似的叙述方式，有民谣的风味，场景广阔，一嗟三叹，喜欢 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

萨福
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Posted: 2006-12-18 00:36:40 Post subject:

多谢各位老师点评。还得向各位高手多学习才是呢。。。。

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-12-20 08:21:56 Post subject:

城市女人迷失了什么？ _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

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