zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-03 20:58:03 Post subject: 春节 |
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雪
我从不用颜色来衡量
总觉得
日子在拐弯处微笑
我才感悟
是北方母亲托起的祥瑞
阳光走进闺房
挤碎的身体不再僵硬
父亲的巴掌
似乎没有落在脸上
我却含着泪水,喊疼
那年的厨房
没有现在那样空旷
堆满各种干柴
我不愿走近半步
怕划破刚换上的新衣服
门口的天空
跟季节一起苍白
南方也不过如此
昂贵的礼物
在手中轻浮起来
我知道,在父母的眼中
怎能比的上,炊烟的升腾
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-03 21:57:34 Post subject: |
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感人的一首,提~ |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-04 00:37:27 Post subject: |
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问好 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-05 18:55:36 Post subject: |
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谢谢明月,谢谢迪拜,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-05 21:09:48 Post subject: |
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门口的天空
跟季节一起苍白
南方也不过如此
昂贵的礼物
在手中轻浮起来
我知道,在父母的眼中
怎能比的上,炊烟的升腾。。。。。。。感人的一首。 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-06 00:01:22 Post subject: |
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赵福治 wrote: |
门口的天空
跟季节一起苍白
南方也不过如此
昂贵的礼物
在手中轻浮起来
我知道,在父母的眼中
怎能比的上,炊烟的升腾。。。。。。。感人的一首。 |
谢谢,希望提一下哦,远握. |
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闲雅 秀才
Joined: 07 Jan 2007 Posts: 121 Location: Ottawa, 加拿大 闲雅Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-06 10:36:54 Post subject: |
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有情有味  _________________ 闲情只自谴
雅趣向谁言 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-06 16:37:43 Post subject: |
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谢谢闲雅,问好,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-06 16:41:31 Post subject: |
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写的不错
有感情 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-09 17:01:37 Post subject: |
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谢谢迪拜,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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