Great Dinner<盛宴>

[白水]

<Great Dinner>


Deep autumn to the poets,
the season seems defoliated
with its colours damaged
to personify their sobs and sorrow

Walking along the path, I am
listening to the wind
in the rain.

Well, my poet
if your desire is as thin
as a piece of paper
do you wish to write about that
or the pallor of nobleness
or the extensions of imagined illness?

I have
cake to ease my hunger
as I type these words for you
a great dinner
is the bright moon
with twinkling stars

<盛宴>

深秋, 好象是专门留给诗人的
一些落叶, 一些残红
恰到好处的
掩盖着你的悲凉
和低泣
我漫步街头
沐雨听风

其实诗人
如果真的当你所有的
企求都薄成了
一张纸
那些无病呻吟
那些贵族的苍白
还顾及点墨吗?

我抓起最后一只烧饼
填充辘辘饥肠
然后悠闲的在键盘上敲
最丰盛的晚宴
莫过
皓洁的月
洒满晶莹的星星

[和平岛]

just made some editing
may not be appropriate:

Deep autumn to poets,
the season seems just some defoliations
with colours damaged
to hide their sob and upset

Walking on the street, I am
listening to the wind
under the rain

Well, my poet
if your desire is as thin as a piece of paper
do you still want to write about that?
such as pallor of nobleness
Or just make a fuss on an imaginary illness

I hold the last cake to fill my hunger
then, type these words using my keyboard:
a great dinner
is the bright moon
with crystalloid stars
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写诗是为了写更好的诗

[白水]

thank you for your edit. i will think it earnesstly

[白水]

此诗歌贴到西人网站, 他们又改了点. 感觉读起来更顺些, 只是和中文意思远了点, 先存这儿吧, 以后再试.
Deep autumn to the poets,
the season seems defoliation
with its colours damaged
to personify their sobs and upset.

Walking on the street, I am
listening to wind
past rain.

Well, my poet
if your desire is thin
as a piece of paper
do you wish to write of that
or the nobleness of pallor
or extensions of imagined illness?

I have
cake to ease my hunger
as I type these words for you
a great dinner

is the moon
set with diademic stars

[kokho]

喜欢 和平岛的 ：））


。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[白水]

KOKHO, ARE YOU SUER PEACE'S IS BETTER THAN OTHER(I MEAN THAT IS NOT MY)?

[kokho]

I am listening to wind past rain.

do you wish to write of that
or the nobleness of pallor
or extensions of imagined illness?

这几句很可能有问题 。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[白水]

[白水]

KOK, 我请教了我的英文老师, 正好她也喜欢诗歌, 还出了诗集. 她帮着改了点. 你说的没错, 老师说PEACE改的那首IS PERFECT. ANYWAY, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

Deep autumn to the poets,
the season seems defoliated
with its colours damaged
to personify their sobs and sorrow

Walking on the street, I am
listening to the wind
in the rain.

Well, my poet
if your desire is as thin
as a piece of paper
do you wish to write about that
or the pallor of nobleness
or the extensions of imagined illness?

I have
cake to ease my hunger
as I type these words for you
a great dinner
is the bright moon
with diademic twinkling stars

[kokho]

[白水]

[kokho]

[白水]

I CHANGED A LITTLE.

Deep autumn to the poets,
the season seems defoliated
with its colours damaged
to personify their sobs and sorrow

Walking along the path, I am
listening to the wind
in the rain.

Well, my poet
if your desire is as thin
as a piece of paper
do you wish to write about that
or the pallor of nobleness
or the extensions of imagined illness?

I have
cake to ease my hunger
as I type these words for you
a great dinner
is the bright moon
with twinkling stars

[奇武]

Late into autumn,
With fading shades,
And floating leaves.
A heavenly time,
For a poem.

。。。 。。。

秋来安湖

是秋天不凉，
是春草不绿，
信步安湖边，
喜见群鱼嬉水欢，

歌之，唱之，
舞之， 蹈之。

逆流而上不是难，
北极冬至不为愁。

天国奖与欢喜日，
江河湖海任自游，
何问是春还是秋。
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奇武