莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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 Posted: 2007-12-01 16:01:30 Post subject: 期待雪 |
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期待着
你纷飞的的感觉
那素色装点山河
没有飘落
疑惑还是暮秋的季节
可知久违难觅呀
不冷的温度
让万物身处迷茫
因此盼望寒絮大朵
干燥土壤不能忍受焦渴
天空为何吝啬？
你在计较得失吗？
既然曾经给予万物生灵
何必又降临枯槁
剥夺鲜活
期盼着
你纷飞的感觉
有你添色
松柏更显不屈体魄
冷梅会傲笑腊月 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-12-01 16:43:26 Post subject: |
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| 莹雪MM的新诗也有新意啊。 |
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杨海军
进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-01 17:26:55 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 莹雪MM的新诗也有新意啊。 |
谢谢qinghongGG点评！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-12-01 17:28:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢您的点评！ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-12-01 18:43:16 Post subject: |
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| MM, 严格说文字上看不是最好的, 但内涵不错. 因超脱了自我而显大气. |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-01 19:29:39 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| MM, 严格说文字上看不是最好的, 但内涵不错. 因超脱了自我而显大气. |
谢谢JJ的点评！
嘻嘻，我以后一定加强炼字的基本功，不但要超脱自我，还要文字..  |
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迪拜
同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588
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| Posted: 2007-12-01 19:37:58 Post subject: |
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| 美丽的雪 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-01 19:49:29 Post subject: |
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谢谢点评！问冬日安好  |
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