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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:22:37    Post subject: 我也单列,网名诗 Reply with quote

白水
黄娟
纵横天下
豪情之外
不改一番柔情

故乡啊
不管走多远
走不出相思
走不出唐朝
那一片月光
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:23:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

和平岛
黄娟
流尽了泪
流干了血
和平
如梦中的鸟语花香

上帝啊
那天堂
仅仅只剩一个虚幻岛?
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:24:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松
黄娟
不长在黄山
那该是什么模样?

那清晨
越过海洋
很远的山岗
想也在半空
白云缭绕
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:25:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

戴玨
黄娟
打不出最后一个字
只好复印

王中之王
深宫
古意亦或应(英)语
都那么幽邃
不可测
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:26:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

非马
如果不是马
你能告诉我
那是什么?

是哲学?
或者
宫廷中
那匹鹿?
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:27:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈
黄娟
一生中
什么定数?

命运
博击沉浮
玄机
一如你的诗
艰如学科?
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 17:34:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

娟, 真棒. 送朵花儿 rose
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 18:30:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪
黄娟
一只杯中
那是什么样的天地?
或者如同一粒沙子
无边的世界
有大海
波涛汹涌

一个写诗的人
在杯中
却可以
冲锋陷阵
浪迹中壮阔英勇
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 19:27:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 23:45:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

转冲浪的诗歌
《黄娟》

第一次念你的名字
我想到了黄鹂
都一样的娇小,声音曼妙
再一次念你的名字
我想到了杜鹃
我哭了
因为我受不了它残忍的
泣血归去
那么,黄娟
干嘛起这么个惹人心乱的名字
偏偏,白水还命令我
为你吟诗

——这辈子,我就读过一首最好的诗,看来不擅水性的我,为它去冲浪都可以
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 00:48:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 01:07:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
杯中冲浪
黄娟
一只杯中
那是什么样的天地?
或者如同一粒沙子
无边的世界
有大海
波涛汹涌

一个写诗的人
在杯中
却可以
冲锋陷阵
浪迹中壮阔英勇


哈哈,感谢。回答:杯中容天。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 01:08:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
杯中冲浪
黄娟
一只杯中
那是什么样的天地?
或者如同一粒沙子
无边的世界
有大海
波涛汹涌

一个写诗的人
在杯中
却可以
冲锋陷阵
浪迹中壮阔英勇


哈哈,感谢。回答:杯中容天。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 01:56:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

這兒也貼一下。
jemmy wrote:
戴玨
打不出最后一个字
只好复印

王中之王
深宫
古意亦或应(英)语
都那么幽邃
不可测

謝jemmy,回贈一首:

晨曦明淨,
天水色。
黑夜走來,
走過數字的方陣,
度量空間彎曲的變化率;
如月的心,
仍在天邊流連,
無法平靜。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 02:39:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

戴生:
字拆得好,说实在的,我也是今天才想,如果拆字,娟可以如月

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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 08:17:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

JEMMY, 虽然你不喜欢, 白水DSG还非粘着你 Wink

<JEMMY>

对着字母发呆, 落笔处只好
喊你一声 娟
声瑟, 而颤
好在白水兄 只是
人们调侃的代码
妹妹, 别对我说胃酸

有人说女儿的唇
是艳丽的玫瑰
我不喜欢
你看那娟字
分明含一枚弯月
清纯的微笑流淌清纯的
涟漪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 14:13:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水,我是故意逗逗你,jemmy这么难写,你需要时间,可白水我排在头里,大家看我的贴不见你的,有悬念啊,
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PostPosted: 2007-11-11 15:05:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

不拆散你跟岛爷,不再生气罗
jemmy
和平岛

两根辫子翘起来
嘴也撅起来
来来来
我也插上
两根筷子
一副牛头
先牛起来
还是先请你吃饭
牛肉烧土豆哦
去去去
两根犄角留给青天
一条尾巴留给白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 13:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松
黄娟
不长在黄山
那该是什么模样?

那清晨
越过海洋
很远的山岗
想也在半空
白云缭绕

没有人对《晓松》一诗中的“白云缭绕”说什么,在清晨,或者应该写白雾,但我用白云,是因为位置。清晨就有中午景观,这种时间错位是不是切合我的科学精神,在评论界看来?当然凡高不会感到奇怪,会剪辑的也不会感到奇怪,在这里我特别地谢谢戴生,因为他写了“科学诗”
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 13:53:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

lake
黄娟
“蝉蚕”无从流水
不声不响的湖
却让坐禅的人
突然悟醒

不经意中我们常常误点
只有幽深
只有远离尘嚣的平静
使再远的白云
也雨点般
落在心里
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