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◆ 秋赋　Ⅱ

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-31 15:29:29 Post subject: ◆ 秋赋　Ⅱ

“很难述说秋天　嚼在舌根像甜苺　风的幻影　抑或胡椒磨擦后车厢　喷嚏不止的伤风　只是这出默剧一展开　道路　就演不完夜露　盛满昙花　傻笑的念头　　然而逆风中的装备时常　偏航了花粉们　偕老同行的坐标...” 眼看一片、两片、三片踏进旋转门活力老人斑黄叶达阵勇气的咖啡厅则溜出他不爱我*的流行乐早已翻白卷发震央多年前的情结当干冷十月天又度包围转角走出你呼吸全新的页码仿佛暮色中不再忠诚少年仰望白鸽的高度耐听的旋律仍专属无以拆卸的私人花园惊觉一株山茶花就要凋落颧骨，真空的发声器但不能弄脏寒暄迎面而来的目光包括说话时得修剪出平整生产线的语调 “或许秋天根本谢绝访客探病　宁可在两列火车交锋背光的霎那　掘出青鸟　在想像中嚼着月光至少　断头的身子仍高歌　听雨，轻晃出眼眶　捧来花茎的养分　燃尽暗房　最后一缕焰蓝思维之后　还能拿来　照亮铁窗的余生” 　faninsa.t　Oct31`2007 注：〈他不爱我〉是一首很久前的流行歌，由莫文蔚演唱。图片：faninsa.t 手绘 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/article.php?pbgid=3596&entryid=574206 _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-10-31 16:25:31 Post subject:

呵呵.问好老朋友. 坐沙发一次. 喜欢的几首作品! _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-31 18:50:51 Post subject:

冰夕, 很喜欢你的诗歌. 问好

博弈
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Posted: 2007-10-31 19:08:27 Post subject:

“但不能弄脏寒暄迎面而来的目光包括说话时得修剪出平整生产线的语调 ” 很有意思。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-11-01 18:24:32 Post subject:

不错的诗！提赏！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-11-02 10:00:38 Post subject:

鲁齐 wrote:

呵呵.问好老朋友.
坐沙发一次.

喜欢的几首作品!

也握好鲁齐久不见!!
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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-11-02 10:01:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

冰夕, 很喜欢你的诗歌. 问好

深谢白水勉励！
拙作，还得多锻字学习呵
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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-11-02 10:04:42 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

“但不能弄脏寒暄
迎面而来的目光
包括说话时
得修剪出平整生产线的语调
”
很有意思。

深谢博弈勉励　

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冰夕
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Posted: 2007-11-02 10:05:25 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

不错的诗！提赏！！

感谢勉励!!
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