Maple Review :: View topic - 小诗四首《紫色》《寒山寺》《青苹果》《药》

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

小诗四首《紫色》《寒山寺》《青苹果》《药》

了因大兄
秀才

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 209

了因大兄Collection

Posted: 2007-10-21 21:53:03 Post subject: 小诗四首《紫色》《寒山寺》《青苹果》《药》

小诗四首《紫色》紫。是六角形的紫色上的露水，找不到单衣只好裸在风里。紫，并不是红的发紫紫不过是一个思乡梦被压在玻璃下，我们还要在玻璃上，做些别的事情。 2007/10/22 《寒山寺》人们纷纷前来，又离去。钟，还是空的。无欲。在我的睡梦中，钟没有投下阴影，隐隐的痛着的还是一江春水。 2007/10/22 《青苹果》无聊的青着，用青旋转。果园散落在地上，任风轻轻的吹拂。阳光有些迷乱。 2007/10/22 《药》药被痛苦吵醒。药，最怕被痛苦咬急的人乱用药。怀才不遇的药和痛苦一起痛苦着。 2007/10/22 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 03:16:05 Post subject:

人们纷纷前来，又离去。钟，还是空的。无欲。好寓

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 07:48:56 Post subject:

综观整组诗歌，不难发现了因大兄的诗歌写作多用象征、暗喻、借喻等手法，叙述节制，意到而不浪费笔墨，给人留有回味空间。

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-10-22 14:08:21 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

综观整组诗歌，不难发现了因大兄的诗歌写作多用象征、暗喻、借喻等手法，叙述节制，意到而不浪费笔墨，给人留有回味空间。

说的很好。

一并学习之。
_________________
I'm nobody! Who are you?

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 17:03:47 Post subject:

药被痛苦吵醒。药，最怕被痛苦咬急的人乱用药。怀才不遇的药和痛苦一起痛苦着。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

冷巉
举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007
Posts: 1106
Location: 中国十堰
冷巉Collection

Posted: 2007-10-25 13:06:11 Post subject:

喜欢前二首。问好。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

沙漠
秀才

Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
沙漠Collection

Posted: 2007-10-28 00:19:52 Post subject:

喜欢前两个，最后一个理性了些。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2007-10-28 00:51:59 Post subject:

非常欣赏,好,学习! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME