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喻体
沙地
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Joined: 22 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 23:29:09    Post subject: 喻体 Reply with quote

这精美或粗糙的喻体

房屋是壳子汽车是壳子

城市里高楼林立里的孤独和宁寂

奔跑的挣扎的挤挤挨挨的

我们一古脑儿伸长了脖子

从马路上穿过从市中心走过

从黑夜里冷冷的飘过

对面是暗的明的暖昧的星星



这屈辱悲壮或痛苦欢乐的颂礼

我举起双手把花环捧起

泥胚的双手橡胶的轮胎

滚滚流动的呻吟和欲望如海洋

席卷了亚洲东部

牛皮大鼓擂击五千年的黄土地

哆哆嗦嗦穿了大衣躲在集市上的行路人

在重重的广告牌后面

一个个表情各异的瞳孔

那边的商场正在叫卖

喧哗繁荣和一切可以引为商标的灵魂



这华丽而简陋的诗篇

吱吱喳喳吵吵闹闹

兴奋的如麻雀

装点的似孔雀

一片片羽毛点拨了油彩

以裸露的胸膛和臀部

挺起圣火

而远方是高高低低的对岸


备注: 生活是华丽的组歌,诗歌成了喧器的制品,城市的诗歌有一道流水线一水下来,一水叫卖.把诗歌当典当品,当商品,当暴露者的艺术时,我说这是暗喻,这是我们孤独的暗喻
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-10-24 17:45:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

小巷深处传来叫卖的声音:
贱了! 诗人贱了-------
------韩少君

暗喻之确!
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阿依琼裙
秀才


Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Location: 废墟之上
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PostPosted: 2007-10-24 18:26:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

寓意经典~
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黑雨滴
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PostPosted: 2007-10-26 19:55:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

每个人都是孤独的
孤独的人才不是可耻的
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