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猜测
桔子
秀才


Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 214

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PostPosted: 2007-10-13 13:59:56    Post subject: 猜测 Reply with quote

猜测

在路上,我不停地猜测
许多人行进在路上
许多人在前面后面穿梭消失

在路上,我不停地分离相似的基因
制造相似的事件
现在,我是否还是真实的躯体
已经成为一个谜团

而可以肯定
我把自己当做敌人
我的胸膛里暗藏着枪支
我无法控制它的速度
瞬间便消失在敌人的肉体中

这是相似的事件
如同许多人沿着直线
消失在迷雾之中

在路上,我不停地猜测
我们的距离可以长也可以短
可以选择掩体,也可以选择亲密无间

而我的行程永远是一条直线
那些弯路从来不需要发生

在路上,我忽略了呼啸的风
远离一颗黑色的痣
向前方接近一切

谋杀

我无法做出判断
它击穿所有的方向
打碎了黑夜的头颅

如此黑暗的夜晚
我被一群流弹包围
那些披着铠甲的词汇
不停地述说着伤痕

我看到一片片落叶在风中消失
剩下孤零零的树干
黑夜已不存在
我是裸露出来还是藏得更深
是元凶还是同谋
我无法做出判断

如果谁能把这个夜晚包扎得完美无缺
那么,我逃离现场的可能性
会不断增大
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 01:03:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

在路上,我忽略了呼啸的风
远离一颗黑色的痣
向前方接近一切 。。。。喜欢这样的结尾。
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 03:28:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的胸膛里暗藏着枪支
我无法控制它的速度
瞬间便消失在敌人的肉体中

向内的写作~问好!
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