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《谁的鞋丢了》

墨林
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Posted: 2007-10-11 05:42:29 Post subject: 《谁的鞋丢了》

《谁的鞋丢了》文/墨林今夜我们分手吧忘记昨天的阳光风雨的屋檐下凄厉的雨丝布满心的每一个角落我曾经为这娇贵的爱撑起一把阳伞你灿烂着如盛开的桃花心湖泛起了涟漪今夜我们分手吧闪电穿透心灵烙下无法补救的伤痛你麻木了我却痛着路灯打探着伞下隐私伞下的四只鞋子顺着涓涓的雨水载着美丽的梦渐渐地远去清晨清道夫吆喝着 “谁的鞋丢了。。。” _________________ 诗歌是不朽的人性之美的灵光;诗歌是人类最纯粹的精神家园。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw http://blog.bandao.cn/archive/8025/

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-11 07:13:18 Post subject: Re: 《谁的鞋丢了》

我曾为娇贵的爱撑起一把阳伞＊能体悟此节意涵昭然所揭的共感 _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-10-12 02:46:22 Post subject:

把上2节去掉如何？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

墨林
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Posted: 2007-10-14 02:27:17 Post subject: Re: 《谁的鞋丢了》

冰夕 wrote:

我曾为娇贵的爱
撑起一把阳伞

＊
能体悟此节意涵
昭然所揭的共感

谢,问好,冰夕!
_________________
诗歌是不朽的人性之美的灵光;诗歌是人类最纯粹的精神家园。

http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw
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