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诗歌:日子
马东旭
童生


Joined: 13 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-13 20:33:08    Post subject: 诗歌:日子 Reply with quote

日子,周而复始
父亲把眼泪深埋在泥土里
滋养庄稼的精髓
握紧镰刀,剖析麦子,剖析土地的问候与内涵

麦子收割之后,父亲穿行在城市
像一根被遗忘的芥草
修路,以握锄的姿势垦植城市纵横的街道

在钢筋堆叠的城堡里哭喊
没有一点回音,四周的墙无关痛痒
比水泥还冷漠的脸,贫血或无血
阴险,让乘兴而来的农民工躲闪不及

从这一年父亲不再走向城市
他真的很老了,老态龙钟
眼睛里空洞无物,找不到一点泪痕
父亲擦亮那个落满浮尘的酒盅
饮一杯黄昏的惆怅
说,这酒比日子还苦,还辣,再搁一段时间
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hepingdao
Site Admin


Joined: 25 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-10-13 21:51:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉重,真挚

欢迎马东旭
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 01:05:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

饮一杯黄昏的惆怅
说,这酒比日子还苦,还辣,再搁一段时间。。。。。深情。
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 16:09:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

父亲擦亮那个落满浮尘的酒盅
饮一杯黄昏的惆怅
说,这酒比日子还苦,还辣,再搁一段时间


沉重~欢迎!
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 20:56:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

再搁一段时间

乌呼-------
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雨中垂钓人
秀才


Joined: 18 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 09:34:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉重,却诗意十足。感叹之余,为诗人喝彩。
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