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[原创新诗] 三星堆之一:金杖
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PostPosted: 2007-10-07 19:34:30    Post subject: [原创新诗] 三星堆之一:金杖 Reply with quote

kokho 在新加坡看过三星堆古蜀文明的出土文物展,更能理解此习作。请大家批评。

神诗三星堆 (一)

周 道 模

金 杖

一株活生生的树
死于黄金做的鱼纹衣裳
在王宫一杵
大地就颤抖 受伤
往边界一指
就是部落争斗的战场
酷爱睡在颂歌中
哪管饿殍野鬼倒路旁
权杖穿上金皮
也撑不住王国
终和国王一起被埋葬
泥土中空心
空心的金皮蠕动几千年
又爬出来 残喘
渴望
给另一棵树 穿上衣裳

注: 此诗发表于<<四川文学>>2005年第三期
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PostPosted: 2007-10-07 20:47:09    Post subject: Reply with quote


金皮
权杖
很有机地穿插的意像
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 00:05:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢岛主赏读!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 04:39:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

权杖穿上金皮
也撑不住王国

哲理!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:33:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

有哲理~问好周!找个时间去看看!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 21:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢墨林和明月的赏读!明月离成都不远吧?三星堆博物馆你看时会震惊的!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 21:36:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

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感谢墨林和明月的赏读!明月离成都不远吧?三星堆博物馆你看时会震惊的!


广汉是三星堆,成都新建了个金沙遗址,全是高科技的东西,听说也很好看,有时间就去看~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 00:35:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

三星堆开馆都十年了,外国总统那么远都来朝拜了,非马先生从美国也来参观了,还写了诗。明月在绵阳这么近,还是写诗的,居然漠视三星堆古蜀灿烂的文明,你咋说?!!
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William Zhou周道模 wrote:
三星堆开馆都十年了,外国总统那么远都来朝拜了,非马先生从美国也来参观了,还写了诗。明月在绵阳这么近,还是写诗的,居然漠视三星堆古蜀灿烂的文明,你咋说?!!


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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 06:39:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

开玩笑,吓你去看辉煌!
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