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胡侃一首《生命中的春天》

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-10-03 23:38:51 Post subject: 胡侃一首《生命中的春天》

《生命中的春天》　　－－－写给诗人雨卉你生命中的春天还有多远？那些行走的背影，让我陷入无限感伤。我听见远行的火车发出轰鸣。纸上的文字，在秋风里融化成一片泪水原凉我。妹妹。我怀疑春天的诚意。岁月深处正在涉水的玫瑰，那么多年，怎么还在路上？天空中雁鸣，像石头正渡过秋水，影子的翅膀穿过一片叶子的惊悸。面对你的幻想，忍不住大哭一场。其实，我不怀疑你的春天。它不在远方的路上，在你心里。我宁愿它是一片嫩叶。在枯枝上张开歌唱的小嘴。你的眼里我看见了船，看见了你的草原以及想像的花。我听见外面的声音，“啊，太阳出来啦！” 花朵。草。雷声。正向你的院子里集结 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-04 00:23:57 Post subject:

其实，我不怀疑你的春天。它不在远方的路上，在你心里。我宁愿它是一片嫩叶。在枯枝上张开歌唱的小嘴。真挚动人～问好诗人海军！

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-10-04 06:27:53 Post subject:

我怀疑春天的诚意。岁月深处正在涉水的玫瑰，那么多年，怎么还在路上？呵呵~~海军,我也在路上啊~~~)) _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-04 18:50:51 Post subject:

感人的诗歌

nobody
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Posted: 2007-10-04 20:30:51 Post subject:

那些行走的背影花朵。草。雷声。正向你的院子里集结胡侃都这么好，让我们怎么活，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-10-04 20:48:05 Post subject:

我读到了温馨，很抒情的那种。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-10-05 16:20:58 Post subject:

谢谢半溪明月、阿依琼裙、白水 Moonlight、nobody、杯中冲浪楼上五位诗人！！很感激各位的一如既往的支持！让我们全力把《北美枫》打造成最好的诗歌论坛！！海军祝大家愉快！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-10-05 17:55:30 Post subject:

我看见了船，看见了你的草原以及想像的花。美好的愿望!问好海军兄!

桔子
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Posted: 2007-10-06 03:45:25 Post subject:

生命中的春天,我们一起期待吧

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Posted: 2007-10-06 05:32:08 Post subject:

是啊,怎么还在路上? _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-10-11 01:39:17 Post subject:

谢楼上三位诗人！海军祝好！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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