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遥远的云南

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Posted: 2007-10-03 07:31:53 Post subject: 遥远的云南

遥远的云南舒中 1 火把，火把高天的火焰直逼肌肤令人不敢举目石林俨然成凝固的火把内心的余烬连着天走到高原深处 2 蝴蝶泉流淌不息从密林里一张一歙的彩翅召唤曾经的美丽风花雪月从头开始品完三道茶洱海浸泡躯体回味，阻断了演绎 3 披星戴月的人都去了哪里摩肩接踵的古城酒吧，还有商铺无立锥之地了徜徉青石路上晚风看见一个人的艳遇 4 雪山的水捧进肺腑那一簇簇山颠的雪看吧看吧云南的高度远离红尘并非模糊 5 最真实可靠的向导打着陌生的手势无论路人是否在意石壁上的东巴文搀扶游人来云南咿呀学语

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-10-03 07:34:49 Post subject:

诗意的云南.

kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-03 10:13:09 Post subject:

。拜读问好：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-10-03 19:25:47 Post subject:

把第5节去掉

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-03 19:36:28 Post subject:

云南我只去了下丽江，香格里拉、蝴蝶泉都没去过，听说蝴蝶泉看不到蝴蝶了，因为树不再分泌一种吸引蝴蝶的东西，现在看到的蝴蝶全是人工繁养的，到了有节日的时候放出来千万只蝴蝶盘绕湖边，那景象一定很壮观，这些只能想象了：）

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Posted: 2007-10-03 19:44:38 Post subject:

语言简洁生动。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-10-04 10:09:49 Post subject:

诗人笔下很美的云南~~~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:20:47 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

诗意的云南.

问好福治兄长,盼您多批评

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:23:04 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

。

拜读问好：）

。。

kokho兄好,祝您笔健!

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:24:53 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

把第5节去掉

谢谢迪拜关心呵护,容小弟三思

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:28:18 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

云南我只去了下丽江，香格里拉、蝴蝶泉都没去过，听说蝴蝶泉看不到蝴蝶了，因为树不再分泌一种吸引蝴蝶的东西，现在看到的蝴蝶全是人工繁养的，到了有节日的时候放出来

千万只蝴蝶盘绕湖边，那景象一定很壮观，这些只能想象了：）

感谢明月啊!我去了丽江,没去香格里拉,感觉丽江很遗憾古城象个超级市场,很遗憾

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:30:11 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

语言简洁生动。

多谢高原的鱼鼓励,远握!

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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:31:43 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

诗人笔下很美的云南~~~~

向阿依琼裙学习和问好

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