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[原创鲜诗] 秋梦

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-02 15:02:36 Post subject: [原创鲜诗] 秋梦

秋梦周道模秋雷打坏了电视电脑秋雨淹没了稻草稻田秋虫唱着胡乱的湿歌秋光被慌乱的云收割我的梦也乱了季节在秋天坠入腊梅的芬芳我的耳鸣已有几天的悠久历史我听见梅说：找不到方向在梅花朵朵中数着夜雨的叹息在夜雨漓漓中梦着腊梅的忧伤错开的梅花啊秋雨不是你的新郎我想上网询问远方的诗友哪儿去找我的明媚秋光 2007-10-3晨6：20 草 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-10-02 16:36:36 Post subject:

我想上网询问远方的诗友哪儿去找我的明媚秋光你真能问, <北美枫>呵. 没听说霜叶红于二月花吗? 还上哪找

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-02 20:55:54 Post subject:

我想上网询问远方的诗友哪儿去找我的明媚秋光呵呵，白水回答的不错，最美的秋光就在　北美枫

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-03 07:30:46 Post subject:

可能明媚的秋光在白水他们那边，明月和我一样正处于秋雨愁绪之中。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-03 15:57:05 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

可能明媚的秋光在白水他们那边，明月和我一样正处于秋雨愁绪之中。

别这么说, 哪里的秋叶都有红有黄. 北美有北美的压力. 前两天和几个新移民聊天, 他们说在国内从未觉得这么累过.

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-03 20:15:35 Post subject:

把我吓住了，不敢去啰！我们这里阴雨绵绵已经一周了，没法出去玩，我是写实的，不是虚拟语气。我们的秋光在未来！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-03 21:25:05 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

把我吓住了，不敢去啰！我们这里阴雨绵绵已经一周了，没法出去玩，我是写实的，不是虚拟语气。我们的秋光在未来！

呵呵，是啊，我这里也是，今天没下了，太天还没放晴，气温也不像前几天那样冷了．国庆冒雨出去走了下，还冻感冒了，今天才缓过来～

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-04 02:10:21 Post subject:

明月不要在绵阳打喷嚏啊，会传染到广汉传染到我的。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-10-04 06:21:50 Post subject:

呵呵~~~~我在行走的路上也是一直有雨,陌生的地方,只有雨是熟悉的~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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