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黄吉元
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 08:11:30    Post subject: <人> Reply with quote
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 16:28:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
这种感觉还真不易捕捉. 让我们看到生活的另一个层面.
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 18:04:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
我推开门，关上了自己

光芒来自内心，现在我们都在路上
点点纯真承受着黑夜的暴力和仇恨
也闪烁惊心的美
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 19:31:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
《那些星星》

比较好。
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 19:54:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
非常细腻的内心描写
问好黄哥～大假愉快！
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 20:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
三首都很出色。感觉细腻，深刻。语言富有弹性且新颖。

个人尤其喜欢《离婚的女人》和《那些星星 》

可当精华

问好老乡
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 20:34:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
那些黑常在夜里醒来
而荒原上那匹奔马
永远追不上蚂蚁
。。。

"我推开门，关上了自己" 堪称绝!

也许,整体上还不够平衡和完美... 个见.
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子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 21:25:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
最愉快的是电话响起
是一根线将两个肉体叼起
两种血液对流不止===真好！！
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