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梅子“心灵絮语”之一
梅子
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 06:07:34    Post subject: 梅子“心灵絮语”之一 Reply with quote

梅子“心灵絮语”
1,秋日
秋天是一幅美丽的童话,当我看到那片片落叶,在空中飞舞,那是一种无形的凄美,是大自然惟美的轮回。
树林枝叶沙沙作响,那是无人演奏的秋韵天籁之音。我仿佛就是那一枚枝叶,咀嚼着清霜走向嫣红。用微闭的眼韵去感受最后的秋绿。脚下的土地也乖巧宁静,不久还身着绿装的小草,已经换上泥黄。它的体像棉被一样柔软,踏在上面感觉好温暖。秋,总是给我太多的遐想和惬意。

2,夏之恋
凌晨,静如画,有柔和的光波,照亮我的思绪。我好恬淡,好惬意,伸出思维的触角,让灵魂感知这个独特的境界,倾听所有生命之音,超脱自我为缕缕清香。彷佛有某种纯净的情感,缓缓流过我的心田。有个声音,甜美、轻柔的回旋。这个夏季,有芬芳弥散,如家温馨。

3,听雨
我喜欢雨,站在屋檐下,对久久不愿离去的雨儿竟然没有半点怨恨。在滴答、滴答的雨声中我的思绪也随之飞扬……
绵绵细雨,纷纷扬扬。润湿了万物,也浸润了心情。在浮躁的社会中,生活、工作的压力,人与人之间的关系,使人们紧张又压抑。走进绵绵细雨中,用心感受细雨的声音与湿润,能使自己的心境慢慢的远离现实的浮躁,使自己静下来,享受那一份无言的宁静。
站在雨前,静听雨声,什么都可以想,什么都可以不想,任由思绪飞扬……
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 06:14:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

思绪飞扬……
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秦华
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Location: 上海
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 17:14:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的不错, 有的句子需要凝练!

如:我喜欢雨,站在屋檐下,————这些是散文的形式,而不是散文诗的
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