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《活络油》外一个

子花
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Posted: 2007-09-23 20:38:56 Post subject: 《活络油》外一个

《路》那年父亲一直望着远去的铁轨尔后望向列车列车的窗口说别再回来那年我刚满十岁长子《活络油》夜一直在我的骨肉间游离此刻显得特别疼痛面对这堆灯火肿得像田野边上的小山丘医生说，试着擦点活络油活血化淤消肿止痛不想，三天后小山丘喝成了大山丘

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-09-23 22:24:16 Post subject:

别样的写实。

子花
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Posted: 2007-09-24 17:47:34 Post subject:

感谢福治诗人到来！！握个手～中秋快乐～～祝所有在北美枫的诗人朋友中秋节快乐．

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-25 01:25:00 Post subject:

身体要照顾　：）拜读　问好　：）［朋友　除了发贴，多给诗友们回帖哟。。］。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-25 05:35:30 Post subject:

灯活? 不懂. 问好中秋

子花
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Posted: 2007-09-26 05:01:16 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

身体要照顾　：）

拜读　问好　：）

［朋友　除了发贴，多给诗友们回帖哟。。］

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感谢ＫＯＫＨＯ诗人关心！！！
暑假回来还没找回感觉！！不敢乱评论别人的贴～～一直在偷偷地学习呢！！

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Posted: 2007-09-26 05:04:17 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

灯活? 不懂.

问好中秋 Very Happy

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈～～手误！！从中可以看出白水 Moonlight治学很严禁那～～～哈哈谢谢

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Posted: 2007-09-26 19:09:08 Post subject:

提！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-26 22:14:11 Post subject:

喜欢第一首~问好子花!

山城子
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Posted: 2007-09-27 00:45:24 Post subject:

喜欢用意象来写实的诗！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-10-03 23:25:14 Post subject:

感谢半溪明月诗人和山城子老师一直的关注！！我的诗歌够不上让大家批评。也提上来大家爱护下后生！！呵呵~~~~~各位诗人国庆快乐诗艺大增，让晚辈做榜样！！

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