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忆儿时中秋
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 16:04:00    Post subject: 忆儿时中秋 Reply with quote

忆儿时中秋

那时候,妈妈忙做着大小菜
一旁陪着的爸爸
说着老家过中秋的事
我等不及要看月饼的样子
中间我好像还混肴了节日印象
去杂物柜里瞎找灯笼

我帮着搬椅子,一圈
端菜,一圈
摆筷,一圈
一群远离家乡的
爸妈的朋友,单身地
不知如何插手地也帮着忙
院子里坐满了大人
大人们会评论今年的月亮
顺便重复去年说的:
那一年的月亮。 。 。
在老家亲手做过月饼。 。 。

看着一桌碟碟盘盘及爸妈的相视微笑
我小小心灵”举头望明月”
真感到诗意了
开窍有那么几秒钟的时间

我等着地等着
妈叫我一起拿文旦了
开心地看文旦被剥了皮
那是我的傻瓜博士帽子

月饼上来喽
有圆有方
我把所有的
‘莲蓉双簧“,“凤梨”,
‘枣泥“还有“五仁“的
饼面上的纸标收集起来—
那是接下来和同学
及隔壁小妹的扑克赌本

睹月夜深, 她和我在银色下
细数着月饼纸。当妈叫我回家时
回抬头—
妈妈好美丽
月亮好美丽
而我,多了两道额头纹
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 20:37:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

我也想童年的中秋, 虽然那时月饼只能吃到一小块 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 21:29:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://www.bokee.net/includes/zhongqiu.jsp?stra=%E7%99%BD%E6%B0%B4

haha~
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 22:15:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

我把所有的
‘莲蓉双簧“,“凤梨”,
‘枣泥“还有“五仁“的
饼面上的纸标收集起来—
那是接下来和同学
及隔壁小妹的扑克赌本

真实有趣。
中秋,咳,想起了多年前,买大把月饼礼券“贿赂“客户。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 22:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
我把所有的
‘莲蓉双簧“,“凤梨”,
‘枣泥“还有“五仁“的
饼面上的纸标收集起来—
那是接下来和同学
及隔壁小妹的扑克赌本

真实有趣。
中秋,咳,想起了多年前,买大把月饼礼券“贿赂“客户。。。


行贿有罪,跑国外躲起来啦~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 22:35:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

童年过中秋很好玩,记得这天是我们村子集会的日子,很热闹.家里会给我们姐弟三人每人一块钱,去街上烧碗醪糟汤还有鸡蛋喝,还会用温水温许多青柿子,脆甜.月饼里面全是冰糖渣子,不怎么喜欢吃,那上月饼去晒麦场的辘石上用小刀切成小块全分给其他孩子了~
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 01:15:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首的乡情 在结尾得到超然的升华 。。

问好 mark ;)

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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 05:30:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
http://www.bokee.net/includes/zhongqiu.jsp?stra=%E7%99%BD%E6%B0%B4

haha~


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