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我心痛得直流泪(旧作，个人的）

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-08 18:09:53 Post subject: 我心痛得直流泪(旧作，个人的）

我心痛得直流泪 90,9,8 我心痛得直流泪我祈祷，就看见了上帝他举着庞大的金香炉却并不显出吃力身上发出没药香神情既慈爱，又关切我向他求告── 他却背过身去哭泣别以为神跟人一样脆弱他陪我流下泪来是因为他想起了──我命途中那些尚未遭遇的不幸 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-09-08 18:40:05 Post subject:

我不企求艰难困苦能有所减少只希望拥有一颗征服它的心 -----泰戈尔 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-08 19:04:56 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

我向他求告──
他却背过身去哭泣

他陪我流下泪来
是因为他想起了──我命途中
那些尚未遭遇的不幸

韩少君 wrote:

我不企求艰难困苦能有所减少
只希望拥有一颗征服它的心
-----泰戈尔

点睛之笔.

NOBODY好诗, 少君好帖

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Posted: 2007-09-08 19:13:30 Post subject:

我心痛得直流泪我祈祷，就看见了上帝他举着庞大的金香炉却并不显出吃力耐品的一首！提！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-09-08 19:36:37 Post subject:

转折的，有力的一笔～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-09-08 21:57:17 Post subject:

感谢以上各位莅临指导。少君真博学啊。也曾看了不少，竟没记住一句，哈哈，惭愧。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-09-08 22:43:15 Post subject:

别以为神跟人一样脆弱他陪我流下泪来是因为他想起了──我命途中那些尚未遭遇的不幸诗人那时候很悲观吗？后一段给人意外之惊喜～问好ＮＯＢＯＤＹ！

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Posted: 2007-09-08 23:58:58 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

诗人那时候很悲观吗？

哈，不是什么诗人。
闲着没事一个人悲观一下，不会对世界造成太大伤害。 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-09-11 00:12:44 Post subject:

别以为神跟人一样脆弱他陪我流下泪来是因为他想起了──我命途中那些尚未遭遇的不幸好感悟，远握。

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Posted: 2007-09-11 07:17:04 Post subject: 啊

17年了，现在读来仍可见悲悯之情。这些年，那个曾经陪你流泪的神，一共流了多少回眼泪 “身上发出没药香”

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Posted: 2007-09-11 11:09:59 Post subject: Re: 啊

谢新华和七七。

七小姐 wrote:

17年了，现在读来仍可见悲悯之情。这些年，那个曾经陪你流泪的神，一共流了多少回眼泪

"仍可见"，因发生过。
"这些年"，他教给我很多：
1。舍弃自己，以成全自己。
2。从痛中开出花朵。

I always believe that, my life is defined on how much I give, not how much I receive.
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