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小路

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-30 15:10:41 Post subject: 小路

小路让早晨，早晨的风在小路上驻足．就像鸟儿和它的歌声滞留在窗前的树上。就像我和爱情站在水边。我们累了，停下来看水中二十年前的倒影。小路上，雾霭迷漫歌声与羊群穿过早晨的暧昧。一朵花推开夏日的窗子。她脸上流着昨夜的泪水泪水里，隐藏春天巨大的空旷与悲伤．．．．．． _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-08-30 15:25:42 Post subject:

空灵而悲伤 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-30 18:44:32 Post subject:

感人之作. 愿诗人早日康复

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-08-31 05:20:13 Post subject:

［明月乱弹］：读懂一首诗，探及到诗人的灵魂内心的东西，也许是读诗人最感兴奋的一件事情。海军的这首题为《小路》的诗歌，我隐隐约约读懂了一些什么。小路既是人生之路，也是爱情之路。小路上有鸟，有歌声，但是也有疲惫，有雾霭叠嶂......一朵花推开诗人的心灵之窗，带来生活中亮丽的歌声。“一朵花”可能是诗人的红颜知己，也可能是生活中转折的好信息或事件。总之，一切的眼泪和悲伤都已成为昨日～呵呵，祝海军诗人早日恢复健康，生活越来越美好～

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-31 14:20:18 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

空灵而悲伤

谢和平岛兄的赏读！海军祝好！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-31 14:21:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

感人之作.
愿诗人早日康复

谢白水诗人！！祝你康健与快乐！！远握！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-31 14:22:31 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

［明月乱弹］：读懂一首诗，探及到诗人的灵魂内心的东西，也许是读诗人最感兴奋的一件事情。海军的这首题为《小路》的诗歌，我隐隐约约读懂了一些什么。小路既是人生之路，也是爱情之路。小路上有鸟，有歌声，但是也有疲惫，有雾霭叠嶂......一朵花推开诗人的心灵之窗，带来生活中亮丽的歌声。“一朵花”可能是诗人的红颜知己，也可能是生活中转折的好信息或事件。总之，一切的眼泪和悲伤都已成为昨日～呵呵，祝海军诗人早日恢复健康，生活越来越美好～

精彩的评论！！谢谢明月诗人！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

新华
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2007-08-31 14:38:51 Post subject:

一条感情之路，冷热交替，丰富真切。远握。

赵雅君
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Joined: 07 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2007-08-31 15:37:20 Post subject:

写的是心里的那条路，身外身内呼应，耐回味。

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