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[好诗收藏]质问  文/李元胜
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 10:51:24    Post subject: [好诗收藏]质问  文/李元胜 Reply with quote

 质问
     文/李元胜

昨晚,有一条鲨鱼来拜访我
它接近窒息,抱怨
我从未贡献过一滴海水

难道真的没有伤感的事吗,它问


[明月乱弹]此诗短小凝练,没有过多的语言,但写法很妙,最末句借鲨鱼的诘问,而使诗意悠远,给人回味无穷之感。生活中伤感的事肯定会有的,诗人坚毅不哭是真的。(诗人的泪都流进肚里了,或流在手帕上了,鲨鱼要靠眼泪来养活,诗人吝啬了,该哭就哭吧,把眼泪哭进海,让大海汹涌澎湃,让生活多些潮水来滋润干涩的心灵土地)诗人这样写,也许是重庆去年大旱带来的灵感~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 12:39:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

鲨鱼必需不停游动,否则没法呼吸 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 20:53:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

心生质问了
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