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八月二十日的四个短章

黑发瀑布
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Posted: 2007-08-27 07:16:06 Post subject: 八月二十日的四个短章

八月二十日的四个短章朱建霞 1 天气渐凉，秋天的血液在一枚叶子上干枯身体是敏感的温度计体温，因一阵风降低一线阳光升高蛰居的小屋被风包围鸢都，深居简出的女子给思绪插上飞翔的翅膀时冷时热的季节谁放弃了牧羊把白云驱赶封住我的窗子挡住我的门扉把秋风挡在外面 2 船在岸上太多的雨水已经停止一个沉默的人低下头碰到水中的石头疾走的白云走出雨季把翅膀还给飞向天空的风筝抱紧仰望的视线接近西方的晚霞倾听一个人的心跳声心，因别离而伤 3 在黄昏散步手机，和心脏一起轻轻震动温馨的话语来自远方路，无限远心，可以近 4 一夜的雨鲁中到梦境的痛只属于自己五月留下足印中的空旷只属于火焰烧掉夜的一角那些未在春天播下的种子与雨水待在一起丰收的果实还会不会装满空了许久的篮子雨，请在清晨把噩梦领走不要让朝阳染上轻微的忧郁不要让醒来的人发现蛛丝马迹 07.8.20.夜 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wfzhujianxia

黑发瀑布
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Posted: 2007-08-27 07:18:31 Post subject:

近期因为工作关系，很少有时间上网。多日未来，看见坛子里这么多好诗，很开心。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wfzhujianxia

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-08-27 07:29:33 Post subject:

喜欢第一节～～秋天的到来～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-27 08:41:46 Post subject:

即兴而写的四个短章,平稳有力.

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Posted: 2007-08-28 08:16:00 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

喜欢第一节～～秋天的到来～

：）感谢阿依琼裙的阅读。
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黑发瀑布
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Posted: 2007-08-28 08:28:09 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

即兴而写的四个短章,平稳有力.

欣赏你的诗歌，向你学习。
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杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-28 15:06:16 Post subject:

提读！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

舒中
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Posted: 2007-08-29 01:38:56 Post subject:

柔美,喜欢

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-29 07:53:42 Post subject:

拜读，柔美抒情～

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