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宁静
下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 10:59:57    Post subject: 宁静 Reply with quote

我宁可这个世界是永恒的冬天
死去的万物皆是白色的沉睡
并在梦里梦外
落下纷纷扬扬的雪花

那些起风的日子
我们从梦的国里
向着远处的风景
一队队出发

时间
安详的躺着
和冰一样透明
宿命清澈
万物
宁静
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 11:28:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首平点,算是茉莉毒药汤或玫瑰死尸羹之后的甜点吧。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 21:48:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

你能不能换张照片?
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 21:55:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
你能不能换张照片?


很好啊,跟他的诗一样裸露,象野兽,不遮掩的。 Very Happy

希望这不是他的全身照 Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 08:51:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好大家。

想让内心安静一些。想念大雪的冬天了,
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 12:21:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!
干净利落!

上帝的以色列
寻找天梯的冰河

照片就别换了
猛男帅哥,何尝不可------
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 13:26:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

我宁可这个世界是永恒的冬天
死去的万物皆是白色的沉睡
并在梦里梦外
落下纷纷扬扬的雪花

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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 23:43:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
这首平点,算是茉莉毒药汤或玫瑰死尸羹之后的甜点吧。

同意NOBODY 加句---
文本的构架和抒发的情感协调,最后"漏斗"出一切,只剩下自己!!呵呵问好野兽诗人!!
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