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白水
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Posted: 2007-08-25 06:08:17 Post subject: 大喘气(NOBODY)

大喘气推开小窗 NOBODY 说不用呼吸,也不用喘气我以为这是灵魂的对话或是上帝传旨屏住, 运气一分钟后我说 88 窗外秋高轻轻地呼出气爽再见了, 朋友我的身边NO BODY

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Posted: 2007-08-25 06:20:26 Post subject:

呵呵，真不错！问好！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-25 06:20:45 Post subject:

呵呵，还真创作了一首大喘气啊，７月半到是快到了，灵魂会爬出来大喘气吧～问好！

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-25 06:32:24 Post subject:

好吗? 听到表扬还真有点小高兴. 这是临屏搞笑, 和灵魂(NOBODY)对话(抬杠)

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:29:44 Post subject:

告诉你，笑死我到你家起诉你。另，大喘气出自 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=7645 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:36:58 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

告诉你，笑死我到你家起诉你。 Very Happy

反正NOBODY, 我才不怕呢 Very Happy

秋来了, 诗人最易伤秋.刚看了一圈诗歌, 秋雨绵绵的.
看来你是个乐天派, 何不学学古韵, 临屏和诗,来点阳光的, 大家也是一乐. 行吗? 不敢强求, IT'S UP TO YOU Wink

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:38:05 Post subject:

不过，老实说，你临屏的水平挺高的。另外，我nobody翻译过来主要含义是“寂寂无名之辈“。当然，你用no body 搞笑也通。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:42:46 Post subject:

搞笑嘛, 有何关系?有名之辈谁到网上当NO BODY

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:55:04 Post subject:

我这nobody，两层含义，一指无名之辈，非常属实。二隐指网上见影不见人。我那博客呢，就叫nowhere. 跟名字对得上。你说好不好？白水？以前上课老师让对对子，“芳草地“，我对了“臭水沟“。。。被点名表扬 I'm nobody Who are you? I live nowhere Where do you live? Oh, you are somebody Oh, you live somewhere That's good That's pretty good What? You want to move in? _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:03:52 Post subject:

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我这nobody，两层含义，一指无名之辈，非常属实。二隐指网上见影不见人。
我那博客呢，就叫nowhere. 跟名字对得上。

你说好不好？白水？

以前上课老师让对对子，“芳草地“，我对了“臭水沟“。。。被点名表扬 Very Happy

我理解的NOBODY仅指网上见影不见人, 大家都一样, NO BODY Wink

诗歌本属于精神交流, 作者是谁并不重要. 雪莱, 普希金,辛弃疾,,,,,谁见过? 我们喜欢的是他们的诗歌.

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:12:48 Post subject:

WOW, YOU WRITE THE ENGLISH POEM SO FAST. COULD YOU TRANSLATE IT FROM ENGLISH TO CHIENES. I WISH EVERY ONE CAN READ IT.

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:24:41 Post subject:

哈哈，打油诗，不是刚写的。我可没有你手快。就不用翻了，用的都是最最简单的单词。自己觉得还有一点点意思。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:33:28 Post subject:

好吧, 尊重你的意见. 不过, 你这首小诗的意境真不错

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:36:58 Post subject:

瞧这乱, 我刚删了我的翻译.好在我的老鼠抓着呢, 再贴上吧试译, 接近原意吗? 我是灵魂你是谁? 我四处漂泊你在哪儿居住? 哦, 你是知名人士哦, 你住在附近这很好真的很好什么? 你想悄悄逼近我觉得灵魂挺好, 既无影, 又不要人间虚名

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:39:10 Post subject:

你可真快，我还正说不呢。译的不错，如第一段。nobody和nowhere双关，不好译。我尝试更忠实原来的试下，加上注释会好些。我是“无名“ （没人知道在意的人，或无形之存在。不拥有物质的人，也许更拥有灵魂）你是谁? 我居“无处“ （没地方住，或不需要地方住）你住哪? 哦, 你是“某人“ （指有点身份的人，或确切之存在）哦, 你住“某处“ （指较高尚的地方）不错真的不错什么? 你想搬进来？（我这穷困之人，会有怎样的吸引力让你想靠近？你想弃你豪居，跟我挤这陋至极致之所？物质不能满足，人需追求灵魂） _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 08:45:13 Post subject:

你怎么又把帖删了? 别人以为白水在对空气说话呢尊重原作. 的确, 双语互译时会丢掉一些精华部分. 更喜欢英文版.

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Posted: 2007-08-25 09:05:30 Post subject:

没删，忙着解释翻译呢。原文简练，翻译过来得解释半天。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 18:01:29 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?

Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good

What?
You want to move in?

After nobody:

You’re nobody?
Who’s nobody?
You live nowhere?
Where is nowhere?

Yeah, I’m nobody
Yeah, I live nowhere
You got it?
Did you really get it?

Nobody lives nowhere
That’s all about it.
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Posted: 2007-08-25 20:08:46 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

nobody wrote:

I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?

Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good

What?
You want to move in?

哈哈，有趣。谢谢。
It's been an interesting talk between nobody who lives nowhere and somebody who lives somewhere.

Yeah, I'm nobody
But I have a name
Do you?

Yeah, I live nowhere
But I have an address
Do you?

My name, and my address
Are written in a book
That lasts, though invisible
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I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-08-25 20:45:11 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

Lake wrote:

nobody wrote:

I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?

Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good

What?
You want to move in?

Well, everybody is somebody
Be it a screen name or a real name
Everywhere is somewhere
Be it in the web or the hell
Why hide yourself as nobody
And your home as nowhere

A book doesn’t last
but the verse immortal
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