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与垃圾一起生活的女人(外二首)
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 20:15:00    Post subject: 与垃圾一起生活的女人(外二首) Reply with quote

《与垃圾一起生活的女人》

紧挨着自行车棚的垃圾屋
是一间低矮的红色砖房
和西街的店铺一样
装有齐檐的宽大的卷闸门
夏日傍晚金色的斜阳
如溪水从门前流过

这条窄巷的两头分别是
城中著名的学府和杂乱的市场
独此一条便捷的通道
穿梭其间的学子
掩着鼻息,迈着急促的步子
一闪身就进入另一片夕阳

和垃圾一起生活的女人
衣着朴素而严谨
表情也似巷间的微风般平静
在把今天收来的垃圾分装之后
此刻,她正在晾晒刚刚洗好的衣裳
不用怀疑,这红砖房就是她在城里的家

2007-8-9


《好想孩子他娘》

收工之后,你坐在
学院南路边的长椅上
读当天的晚报
满地的槐花散发着微微的清香
你的兄弟们坐在两边
听你念一些理短家常
露出平静而满足的微笑
你忽然停下来
说南方正闹水荒——
你哗哗地翻着报纸
寻找你们的故乡
从头到尾来来回回的瞧
也未见到你们那穷乡僻壤
你憨笑着
把报纸丢到一旁
摸了摸肚子,看了看天
突然间你竟好想孩子他娘

2007-7-30


《平衡》

美是数的和谐。——毕达哥拉斯

我坐在教室一隅
和两个沉睡的女孩
形成一个等边三角形
整个下午不敢擅自挪动
生怕破坏了这无声的平衡

2007-8-10
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想起
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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 20:37:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-08-12 20:41:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活升华的诗歌. 有味
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 01:24:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢 第三首 :))

问好 老朋友 。。

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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 04:53:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 07:41:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 07:41:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 09:43:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

第三个有味~前两首反映地层人们的生活和形态,亲切~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 14:58:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

有生活,需要提炼,比如第三首,就比较好
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