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初夏上班途中見街頭孤生洋紫荊

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-08-02 07:00:07 Post subject: 初夏上班途中見街頭孤生洋紫荊

暮色繁枝春尚餘，倦看男女笑相扶。華燈萬點常為伴，不解情愁皎月無。按: 洋紫荊是香港常見的樹木，花開得很密（有點像櫻花樹），一般三、四月就謝了，但有少數能堅持到六月。香港市區樓房擠得很，加上燈火通明，夜空中一般是看不到月亮的。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-08-02 09:31:15 Post subject:

最后一句倒是引出无限情愁。喜欢这首。来得自然蕴藉风流。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-08-02 11:04:53 Post subject:

现代写意。

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-08-02 23:52:57 Post subject:

謝二位賞讀！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-08-03 18:02:26 Post subject: Re: 初夏上班途中見街頭孤生洋紫荊

戴玨 wrote:

暮色繁枝春尚餘，倦看男女笑相扶。
華燈萬點常為伴，不解情愁皎月無。

按:
洋紫荊是香港常見的樹木，花開得很密（有點像櫻花樹），一般三、四月就謝了，但有少數能堅持到六月。
香港市區樓房擠得很，加上燈火通明，夜空中一般是看不到月亮的。

华灯万点不能代替皎月一轮，虽常为伴却不解情愁。欣赏！

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Posted: 2007-08-05 05:04:12 Post subject:

謝曉松賞讀！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2007-08-05 18:49:58 Post subject:

抒写性灵的睿智小品。 _________________ 清狂傲世随天性,仗义疏财任我行。博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/duzhizhang440

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Posted: 2007-08-05 23:31:13 Post subject:

在暮色中去上班，看来是上夜班。

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謝扁舟關注！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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