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梅影三叠
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 06:39:25    Post subject: ◆最后的玫瑰 Reply with quote

◆最后的玫瑰

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是凋谢的时节了。天空阴霾
大地满是泥泞
那些祝福的歌声一直在路上
徘徊。马蹄声急
急不过岁月的风言风语

纵然露珠的晶莹,为你打上粉底
纵然细软的缎带,替你束紧纤腰
而千万滴柔情的泪
早已被风霜掳去

廉价的鲜艳被夜色染黑
真情沦落
浪漫遗失
一份高贵,碎成两处歧途

在夜的空旷地,请举起烧天的火炬
照亮
这人世间最后的,一朵玫瑰
用灼红的双眼
看它凋零
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 07:39:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

凄美而温婉
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 19:12:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤感的玫瑰.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 20:36:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
凄美而温婉


感谢白水姐姐阅评
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 20:37:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

桔子 wrote:
伤感的玫瑰.


问好桔子朋友,!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 21:19:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

廉价的鲜艳被夜色染黑
真情沦落
浪漫遗失
一份高贵,碎成两处歧途

在夜的空旷地,请举起烧天的火炬
照亮
这人世间最后的,一朵玫瑰
用灼红的双眼
看它凋零

太凄凉了,落花有意流水无情
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 22:19:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

不忍归去。问好梅影。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 01:51:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言 wrote:
廉价的鲜艳被夜色染黑
真情沦落
浪漫遗失
一份高贵,碎成两处歧途

在夜的空旷地,请举起烧天的火炬
照亮
这人世间最后的,一朵玫瑰
用灼红的双眼
看它凋零

太凄凉了,落花有意流水无情


感谢你!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 01:52:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

qxz-123456 wrote:
不忍归去。问好梅影。


智先生好!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 16:33:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读,好久没有见到你了。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-26 14:32:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

dead rose
dead rose dead rose
dead rose rose dead rose
dead rose dead rose
dead rose
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PostPosted: 2007-07-27 02:34:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!!提读!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 02:17:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤感的玫瑰 欣赏Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 03:27:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

纵然露珠的晶莹,为你打上粉底
纵然细软的缎带,替你束紧纤腰
而千万滴柔情的泪
早已被风霜掳去
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 03:56:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

美,美得伤感而层次有分
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 04:38:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

这人世间最后的,一朵玫瑰
用灼红的双眼
看它凋零
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 15:39:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情很沉实。久不见。问候你。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 23:41:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢阿依,谢谢迷雾挂念
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 23:43:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
dead rose
dead rose dead rose
dead rose rose dead rose
dead rose dead rose
dead rose


呵呵多谢
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 23:44:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

游向高原的鱼 wrote:
拜读,好久没有见到你了。


问候,很感谢你的和诗:)
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