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背面切入 《郝秘书的谴词造句》
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 22:30:13    Post subject: 背面切入 《郝秘书的谴词造句》 Reply with quote

郝秘书的谴词造句



谴词

四月,莺飞草长
在干部们的带领下
广大农民迎来播种高潮

六月,艳阳高照
有十二万干部群众掀起抗旱高潮

七月,长空云少
根据上级指导
各村又掀起水田改旱田
大田改种菜的高潮

十月,秋高气爽
农业损失副业补上
全县再掀劳务输出新高潮

腊月,北风呼啸
工作总结发号召
外出人员要及时返乡
要掀起明年备耕生产更大高潮

年终晚宴,美酒佳肴
秘书长有点喝高:
来,老郝
你写了一年的材料
今儿我们要喝出一个象样的
高潮——



造句

对下马庄的防疫和超生问题
要作到一锅焖

对小李村的几个钉子(上访)户
要文火慢炖

对刘发屯的经验
不要鸡蛋里面挑骨头

对三丈社的缺点
就别添油加醋了

对社办砖厂的那点利润
更不能吃着碗里看锅里

对李局的发言要反复咀嚼
对张处的讲话要细心品味
尤其是对扬县的重要指示
一定要
吃准吃透
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 22:37:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言灵活准确
Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 23:08:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言及在时代,或反之? Laughing
挺真实,但对海外的二代华人,这样的语言是陌生的。
学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-07 04:55:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这两首!觉得口语诗,看似简单,其实太难写了!!问候少君!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-08 14:42:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢岛主、搏弈兄、海军的关注。

这种写法只是向度问题。它关注的主要是内容。形式并不可取。

但这种形式确实很难。是内容选择了这种形式。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-08 17:38:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

川味鲜 Very Happy
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