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荷葉杯（韋莊體）

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-01-31 08:33:12 Post subject: 荷葉杯（韋莊體）

墟落夜深人靜，星冷。佳節憶當初。花前明月照東湖，映皓齒清矑。漂泊悵然天外，無奈。問此恨誰知？蠟香飄散已多時，情緒更遲遲。注：情緒：情思意緒遲遲：久久不息

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-01-31 22:12:37 Post subject:

欣赏。感觉思念重重。见情感。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-02-01 08:25:59 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

欣赏。感觉思念重重。见情感。

謝賞！

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-02-01 19:59:31 Post subject:

来向你学习。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-02-01 23:48:02 Post subject:

特欣赏“蠟香飄散已多時，猶念想遲遲” _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-02-03 10:50:05 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

特欣赏“蠟香飄散已多時，猶念想遲遲”

謝司馬先生賞閱！

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-02-03 10:50:50 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

来向你学习。

大家互相學習。

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-02-04 01:34:47 Post subject:

做了大的修改，現用雙調韋莊體。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-07-06 20:48:12 Post subject:

读了学习了。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-07 16:49:59 Post subject:

情韵深远。

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