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走进小巷（四首）

闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2007-07-05 05:17:03 Post subject: 走进小巷（四首）

《走进小巷》寻常巷口，樟树依旧夕阳，印在厚重而残破的砖墙上枣红马奔驰而来蹄声急，踏碎石板上许久的寂寥我惊恐的眼神，无人注意通道太狭窄，我紧贴墙壁，避让汹涌的马队凉风骤起，从身边掠过青蓝的天空，唯留一线惨白的光声音渐远，黄昏里,尘埃飞舞久久无法落定 2007-4-20 《不仅仅是……》石榴，花过去两天了，还含苞，藏在树叶间红艳欲滴，只是欲滴走在人潮汹涌的路上，我悔，我恨止不住悔恨交加昨夜微微的，温柔的风，轻易地吹开了我的衣裳像硕大的花开 2007-4-20 《悲鸣》被你斩首我死了，系于马脖子上，像实心铃铛在凄风里，左右摇摆如果再被镂空，多么好行走途中，偶尔还能发出一些声响有人听到 2007-4-20 《苍蝇》不是我邀请的它有翅膀，比我有更多的活动自由家里唯一能飞的生物，挤占了我有限的空间如果它不离开，那么贪婪那么肮脏，会咬坏和玷污屋里的东西 2007-4-20

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Posted: 2007-07-05 17:59:12 Post subject:

《不仅仅是……》石榴，花过去两天了，还含苞，藏在树叶间红艳欲滴，只是欲滴走在人潮汹涌的路上，我悔，我恨止不住悔恨交加昨夜微微的，温柔的风，轻易地吹开了我的衣裳像硕大的花开 2007-4-20 ——欣赏学习！ ——问好！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-07-06 08:50:48 Post subject:

《悲鸣》被你斩首我死了，系于马脖子上，像实心铃铛在凄风里，左右摇摆如果再被镂空，多么好行走途中，偶尔还能发出一些声响有人听到学习`

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Posted: 2007-07-06 15:22:44 Post subject:

学习 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-06 21:36:01 Post subject:

一看就知道是南方的小巷子：）很喜欢 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-07-06 23:11:53 Post subject: Re: 走进小巷（四首）

闽北阿秀 wrote:

《走进小巷》

寻常巷口，樟树依旧
夕阳，印在厚重而残破的砖墙上
枣红马奔驰而来
蹄声急，踏碎石板上许久的寂寥
我惊恐的眼神，无人注意
通道太狭窄，我紧贴墙壁，避让汹涌的马队
凉风骤起，从身边掠过
青蓝的天空，唯留一线惨白的光
声音渐远，黄昏里,尘埃飞舞
久久无法落定

2007-4-20

不知這棗紅馬是否有所指？
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闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2007-07-07 07:07:34 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

《悲鸣》

被你斩首
我死了，系于马脖子上，像实心铃铛
在凄风里，左右摇摆
如果再被镂空，多么好
行走途中，偶尔还能发出一些声响
有人听到

学习`

怎么都是学习啊，汗！

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