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昨晚乌云翻滚
春雨
童生


Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 31
Location: 中国吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 15:19:36    Post subject: 昨晚乌云翻滚 Reply with quote

我在仔细观看黑与白的争夺战时
焦急迫切恐惧和惊慌在互相撕打
亲爱的你在向它要你的灵感吗,
它们滚动的道道真象排骨,
亲爱的我想吃排骨,妻说
查看昨晚到今早的轨迹
感觉无梦就没必要
再去强迫自己扯开夜的回忆
我一直想测量你手中的《资本论》
和著作者眼前那块面包之间的长度
想做的和该做的事也都翻滚而至
每十年才要出现一次的时刻
任驰的《一秒钟之前》
只有今早才出现的这么完美
我必须要完成几份答卷分别去交给
我的父母认识我的和知道我名字的人
让他们用表情和心情评判
诗句却再没有修改期的时间
冲锋和撕杀只能实现在闭上眼睛后的战场
几位少妇的狂笑和听不清的语言在意外中如期而至
真正的谎言和飘渺的里程坐在饭桌旁
筷子的方向同时指向了欲望
摆出许多不愿拿出的条件
想再次品味消灭月光时的场面
而你的拒绝却在把我变相的成全
谎言的目的不是欺骗
自己的代号又一次被划在想要进入的范围之外
黑白均匀的覆盖
还不如乌云翻滚的场面

2007-7-7 07:07
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 18:31:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

很多思考,阅读有阻塞,诗意就不够了
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 19:10:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

阅读不畅.
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