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[原创]黑夜正塌陷下来(组诗)

晓雾
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Posted: 2007-06-27 06:42:02 Post subject: [原创]黑夜正塌陷下来(组诗)

黑夜正塌陷下来(组诗) 文/晓雾《黑夜正塌陷下来》云撕开了天空巨大的裂缝在星星的悬崖上谁砸疼了土地此刻土地是多么饥渴在一块块石头上承受而星星的种子被大地聚融那些隐藏的牙齿咬住根咬住尘埃和一片片水域此刻我已是夜的碎片了就在自己的影子里听到了树木花草的喊声《风不知道往哪边吹》山谷的风田野的风海上的风还有一些无名的风和各种影子里的风这些行走着的文字捆起土地奔向各自的方向一浪高过一浪的喊声在空阔里翻寻土地上的动静而是什么突然的丢失就像巨大的气流拥塞在出口我听到了尖叫和碎裂声而他们又像是一种道路又被谁审视《而我，依然擎着一枚火把》什么文字能够撑起那种方向我嫁接针芒上的光在路上卷起纯粹的月光撩开遗失的梦给浪尖上的风我就坐在朽木上打开记忆掰开泥水里的花语带上鸽翅上的天空夜晚和风暴我就握紧黑色里的石头做一次鉴别那就先忘掉世上的颜色在水凝注的神里擎起火把火把照亮谁千年的骨头《走吧----》山顿悟了万年水漂流了万年风也撞出了夕阳的血还有翘首的黑夜把自己装载在星星上大地在光里燃烧出花朵的思绪走吧---- 不要说荒芜的家园还在翅膀上盘旋不要说路上还有无形的墙不要说路上的荆棘刺痛了天空我们就踏着叶子上的沉思走吧在夜色飘落之时刚好上路

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Posted: 2007-06-28 12:18:36 Post subject:

不错的一组, 提读

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Posted: 2007-06-28 16:59:37 Post subject:

读来让人激昂，有力量的一组，语言厚实。问好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-06-28 20:34:48 Post subject:

好诗歌！

晓雾
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Posted: 2007-07-03 17:20:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

不错的一组, 提读

谢谢白水 Moonlight．问好，握！

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Posted: 2007-07-05 00:48:14 Post subject:

赏读。顶一次。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-10 00:15:31 Post subject:

欣赏的作品. 问候! _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

晓雾
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Posted: 2007-07-16 06:50:28 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

读来让人激昂，有力量的一组，语言厚实。问好！！

谢谢．问好！
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Posted: 2007-07-16 07:08:11 Post subject:

語言的詩歌,贊! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

晓雾
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Posted: 2007-07-31 06:10:40 Post subject:

谷风 wrote:

好诗歌！

谢谢谷风．多提意见，握手！
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Posted: 2007-08-25 18:36:44 Post subject:

提读! _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

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Posted: 2007-08-26 08:54:11 Post subject:

此刻我已是夜的碎片了就在自己的影子里听到了树木花草的喊声 ---------------------------------------------- 我就坐在朽木上打开记忆掰开泥水里的花语带上鸽翅上的天空夜晚和风暴我就握紧黑色里的石头做一次鉴别那就先忘掉世上的颜色在水凝注的神里擎起火把火把照亮谁千年的骨头 --------------------------------------------- 这两段很有味道，问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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