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刚忙完一阵,休息它两天,贴三个短的
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 21:35:15    Post subject: 刚忙完一阵,休息它两天,贴三个短的 Reply with quote
挽留
89,4

我要把你挽留到最后一刻
象是拉满的弓，不能再坚持
然后我会忍住伤痛，突然松开手
让你象箭一样，霎那间消失无踪

魔术
90,1,9

一只漆黑的木柜
没有人看清过程──
走进去一个温柔的姑娘
走出来一头狮子

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89,12

被乱枪击毙在地
我毫无怨言
我只是不情愿
有人朝我瞄准
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 22:52:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
短小精悍
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 23:19:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
挽留 好狠心啊
魔术 让我想到婚姻
问好NOBODY
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 02:17:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
多谢岛主和明月.
没时间写,只好拿以前的出来抵挡一下.
想法都变了,有时也想写些新东西.
但往往最后还是觉得,什末也没有,是更准确的表达.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 03:47:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
哲理, 精湛 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 15:00:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哲理, 精湛 Wink


多谢白水，不敢当。小儿科。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 15:12:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
有意思！
小诗精当。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-16 04:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
有意思！
小诗精当。


我的枪容易走火，一般的对着自己才不会有危险。瞄准反倒中不了呵
喜欢走进去一头狮子，走出来一个小姑娘~~~
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