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<<钢琴的旋律>>

鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-06-28 23:09:52 Post subject: <<钢琴的旋律>>

《钢琴的旋律》鲁齐最后，或是第一颗音符的前边那样寂静。恍若听到羽毛落地声响梳洗过后的艾丽斯，光彩粲然已察觉梁祝从前台刚刚走过忧郁的声音蓦然消失；于是闪下腰臀，从幕后走向了舞池来到通往维也纳森林的小路上前边有那么多熟悉的身影：贝多芬，殷承宗，克莱德曼…. 她不敢，也不能停止自己舞蹈依稀有帕格尼尼小提琴的伴奏倾泄在自己窈窕的身体上面舞蹈的身体，憧憬爱情的思想被点燃的黑夜之后，曦辉里的杲阳艾丽斯把梦举过头顶，隐秘起萌动的欲望，静想自己心事：森林里有八十八种鸟雀，小鹿几点喝水自己走了，外祖母的早饭谁来烹做？外祖母目光失聪，用耳朵聆听外孙动人优美的身体声音，如小溪流淌醉人心脾的清脆旋律。外孙走来了银铃般呼唤着，青春气息里有玫瑰花香艾丽斯却没回家，一直旋转着走到舞台旁侧，消失在了一声小锤的休止里 + + + _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

桔子
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Posted: 2007-06-29 17:14:57 Post subject:

很美妙的旋律。

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Posted: 2007-06-29 17:52:16 Post subject:

拜读兄弟好诗

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Posted: 2007-06-29 17:58:00 Post subject:

桔子 wrote:

很美妙的旋律。

谢谢桔子看阅！
问候并握！
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Posted: 2007-07-03 17:18:37 Post subject:

外祖母目光失聪，用耳朵聆听外孙动人优美的身体声音，如小溪流淌醉人心脾的清脆旋律。外孙走来了银铃般呼唤着，青春气息里有玫瑰花香艾丽斯却没回家，一直旋转着走到舞台旁侧，消失在了一声小锤的休止里提! _________________ 晓雾博客欢迎光临！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/blogxiaowu http://blog.163.com/yeah_116

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Posted: 2007-07-04 16:41:59 Post subject:

写得细腻到位，显示出成熟的功力。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-07-13 13:36:46 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

拜读兄弟好诗

我也非常喜欢你的诗歌.
问候!
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鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-07-13 13:37:19 Post subject:

晓雾 wrote:

外祖母目光失聪，用耳朵聆听外孙
动人优美的身体声音，如小溪流淌
醉人心脾的清脆旋律。外孙走来了
银铃般呼唤着，青春气息里有玫瑰花香
艾丽斯却没回家，一直旋转着走
到舞台旁侧，消失在了一声小锤的休止里

提!

谢谢晓雾看阅!
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Posted: 2007-07-13 17:29:47 Post subject:

随你的旋律起舞赞！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-08-25 18:42:20 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

随你的旋律起舞

赞！

谢谢.
是音乐之舞!
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