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草原·沙漠·高原
云南张礼
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PostPosted: 2006-05-28 02:28:48    Post subject: 草原·沙漠·高原 Reply with quote

草原·沙漠·高原

张 礼

草 原
在我的额头的高原上生长着草原
在黑咕隆咚的蛙居小井
遥远的草原只是一种幻像
一种不可渴求的向往
城边足球场上平坦坦的草地
我赤足踩过最宽广的草原

草原的声音从耳旁明朗朗地穿过
草原的河流从额头热辣辣地流过
草原啊草原
狂暴的山火残陷
燃遍天边残留的一丛小草
推开早晨窗前浓雾
是否还见草原绿遍了
那淌满眼泪的屋后山岗

沙 漠
丛林的边缘草地在蔓延
草地的边缘,大地抖掉
草丛里蟋蟀的怪叫声
黄色的沙尘构成了森林的屏障
残酷的戈壁搂住了群山

对于沙漠的理解来自于媒体
那美极了的沙丘
一块块诱人的黄色大蛋糕
烤在大地上只有巨人能吞咽
阳光便是天然的大烤箱

这便是沙漠的景色么
雏鹰在空中凝滞不动时
天空麻木得不见一片云
几只鹰便成了点点的灰色云朵
阵阵的驼铃从天边响来时
地平线上有了一队蚂蚁的影子
高耸的骆驼懒洋洋近入眼帘
这时驼峰也成了沙滩的山脊线

高 原
此时高原在你踩住的脚下
站在云海与峡谷之巅
你凝视着峡谷与云海
那块块的云朵,云朵的块块
神仙一样云游

还有,那峡谷口的两壁
平滑还有凹陷的峭岩
埋伏着宇宙的危机
高原啊高原
峡壁上伸出的树枝
能否阻挡住一条坠下的生命
高原啊高原呵
你的纵横你的傲岸你的肩宽
能否驮起坠下的那片夕阳


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PostPosted: 2006-05-28 02:33:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

整体不错,这组诗应该是内省的,我觉得不宜有抒情的笔调可能会耐读些。
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PostPosted: 2006-05-28 04:09:58    Post subject: 流浪 Reply with quote

喜欢第一首。问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 18:12:06    Post subject: 谢两位 Reply with quote

也来回归走走
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 19:00:59    Post subject: 有味道 Reply with quote

草原的声音从耳旁明朗朗地穿过
草原的河流从额头热辣辣地流过
草原啊草原
狂暴的山火残陷
燃遍天边残留的一丛小草
推开早晨窗前浓雾
是否还见草原绿遍了
那淌满眼泪的屋后山岗
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 19:17:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

提读:))问好
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