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[原创诗散文] 彩绘女人
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 23:56:46    Post subject: [原创诗散文] 彩绘女人 Reply with quote

彩 绘 女 人
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美 容
沉迷于内心的渴望,晕眩于流行的时尚,受制于男性的霸权,爱美的女人们,奉
献自己的身体,把父母创造的经典作品当草稿,任意地删改,装修得漂亮迷人。让男
人的心狂野,让路人的目光蚊子样追踪,让社会莫名其妙地赞“美”。

染黄发
柳芽黄了,菜花黄了。天生的黑发不美了,得染成黄发才从众心安啊。于是暮色中飘浮着黄黄的岛影,春风里飞舞着黄黄的心绪。头发不黄的男人,有的就喝黄酒、说黄话、做黄事。谁把这个时代也染黄了呢?

绣 眉
父母栽的眉毛又嫌散乱,且放错了位置。拔眉毛如拔野草,在野草地的上面绣出又弯又细的新眉,绣出蝶飞凤眼的妖媚。柳叶细眉啊,一挑一嗔就媚意横生,男人的目光就归顺地翻飞。世人找到了指代,就简称美女为“美眉”。

卷睫毛
把睫毛卷成翘翘的黑黑的窗帘,闭眼幻想夜晚的温馨,睁眼眨着幽黑的诱惑。窗帘外边飘过春天的风景,窗帘里面汪起两泓难解的风情。进出窗帘的是暖人的光,还是灼人的电?啊,黑黑的翘翘的睫毛,是春花倚偎的竹篱,还是男人迷误成囚的栅栏?

洗 面
水洗脸,那是祖先的发明;液洗面,才是当代的创新。洗面,洗去喧嚣的风尘;洗面,抹去烦人的斑纹;洗面,揉出白嫩的青春。就是徐娘,也要搓出风韵。啊,生活的安排,人世的命运,女人的资本是什么?是否都靠脸面活命?

漂 唇
火烧过,风啃过,唇,憔悴了。除了吃饭说话,口唇还要美观、抒情,还要开口如莲,诱惑春风来吻。红润有弹性的唇瓣,就是女性的花朵。少女的唇,就开放天然的嫩红吧!漂唇,让少妇梦回少女的红嫩……

露 脐
学傣族少女,展露西双版纳的神秘风情。缩短衣衫,露出如柳摆风的细腰;亮出美脐,展示情感苏醒的穴位。男人的目光不再散乱,男人的脚步摇摆醉意,男人的手指就梦想犯规……

指上花
十朵花开在脚趾盖上,步摇岁月,花开脚印。十朵花开在手指盖上,梅花浴雪,香浸生命。时光如雨,终会洗去彩绘的虚花。美是血之色、肉之温。玉指的美是咬之痛、爱之痒。就让指花抒情在爱梦里……

两瓣红
一横声音,上瓣在呓语幸福,下瓣又颤栗出迷误。一裂伤口,左瓣在激动快乐,右瓣又流沁痛苦。一抹亘古,天瓣牵开彩霞,地瓣又堆燃秋枫。两瓣红啊,合拢,吞了多少献身的阳光;绽开,吐出多少血色的春风……

2005.7.17上午草
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PostPosted: 2007-06-24 04:34:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

有特色的一组短章,多来交流.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-24 06:27:56    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

请赵先生多指导.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-24 17:35:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

露 脐
学傣族少女,展露西双版纳的神秘风情。缩短衣衫,露出如柳摆风的细腰;亮出美脐,展示情感苏醒的穴位。男人的目光不再散乱,男人的脚步摇摆醉意,男人的手指就梦想犯规…… -----------引自周道模

露脐——那叫第三只眼看世界,看发疯的世界。
女人一切为美而做出的努力或牺牲,恐怕大多是为了迎合众多男人审美的需要,男人都不会受到指责,女人又有什么不妥。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-29 10:28:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

研究的透彻 :))

问好 新朋友。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-07 07:41:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 酸风 和 Kokho 的赏读! 不过我没有贬低女性的意思,讨好都来不及呢。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 10:57:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好哈,读过了
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 17:28:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好竹林君!“宁可食无肉,不可居无竹”。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 03:05:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏并问候。
常来,谢谢支持!
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Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 19:12:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好冷巉和华山!
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