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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 07:35:01    Post subject: 墓志铭(合别人一首) Reply with quote
墓志铭

躺在地下的这个女人
生前被岛主*叹曰：
“了不得的女人”
朋友们赞她聪慧贤淑
她则以荡妇自居
为了卑微的十个情人*
抛夫弃子 众叛亲离

现在，她如愿进了天堂
人们仍津津乐道
她与十个情人的故事
亲人们早已原谅了她
情人们各个悲痛欲焚
一页页化为灰蝶
追随她天堂里继续逍遥

主已原谅她的一切
她为诗歌情人的献身
洗濯了灵魂的贞洁
阿门，我主祝愿：
半溪明月俗名阿红
你将与你的诗歌情人*
永垂不朽
2007-6-4

注释:岛主指北美枫的版主和平岛.
十个情人谐音诗歌情人
诗歌情人喻将来要出的诗集.(当然还需努力Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 08:28:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
主已原谅她的一切
她为诗歌情人的献身
洗濯了灵魂的贞洁
阿门，我主祝愿：
半溪明月俗名阿红
你将与你的诗歌情人
永垂不朽

感动

人们只知道, 浪子回头
让我们来为半溪勇敢的坦白喝彩

诗歌, 如果你能够真诚, 能够面对现实, 就已经接近了诗意的真理
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 08:50:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
主已原谅她的一切
她为诗歌情人的献身
洗濯了灵魂的贞洁
阿门，我主祝愿：
半溪明月俗名阿红
你将与你的诗歌情人
永垂不朽

感动

人们只知道, 浪子回头
让我们来为半溪勇敢的坦白喝彩

诗歌, 如果你能够真诚, 能够面对现实, 就已经接近了诗意的真理
Very Happy



岛主:你又搞错,十个情人即指诗歌情人,诗歌情人是指我将来要写出10本诗集(哈哈，不可能的啦),一页页化蝶,死后烧为灰烬! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 08:51:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
主已原谅她的一切
她为诗歌情人的献身
洗濯了灵魂的贞洁
阿门，我主祝愿：
半溪明月俗名阿红
你将与你的诗歌情人
永垂不朽

感动

人们只知道, 浪子回头
让我们来为半溪勇敢的坦白喝彩

诗歌, 如果你能够真诚, 能够面对现实, 就已经接近了诗意的真理
Very Happy



岛主:你又搞错,十个情人即指诗歌情人,诗歌情人是指我将来要写出10本诗集(哈哈，不可能的啦),一页页化蝶,死后烧为灰烬! Very Happy


笑死了
我以为你真的有10个情人
当场晕倒
Embarassed Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 09:12:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
主已原谅她的一切
她为诗歌情人的献身
洗濯了灵魂的贞洁
阿门，我主祝愿：
半溪明月俗名阿红
你将与你的诗歌情人
永垂不朽

感动

人们只知道, 浪子回头
让我们来为半溪勇敢的坦白喝彩

诗歌, 如果你能够真诚, 能够面对现实, 就已经接近了诗意的真理
Very Happy



岛主:你又搞错,十个情人即指诗歌情人,诗歌情人是指我将来要写出10本诗集(哈哈，不可能的啦),一页页化蝶,死后烧为灰烬! Very Happy


笑死了
我以为你真的有10个情人
当场晕倒
Embarassed Laughing


你也吓了我一跳,哈,怨我没注释清楚,重新注释了下,这下别人不会理解错了吧Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 09:16:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
是呀
我这人太实在, 谁说的话, 我都会立马相信的
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 09:28:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
是呀
我这人太实在, 谁说的话, 我都会立马相信的
Laughing

那你以后不敢相信我的话了? Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 09:31:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
是呀
我这人太实在, 谁说的话, 我都会立马相信的
Laughing

那你以后不敢相信我的话了? Smile


照信不误
下次如果你说20个情人
我还是会相信的
半溪多大的魅力呀
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 12:19:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
哈哈。不过诗写得还是不错的。对于诗歌，心有既有。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 19:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好明月！最近状态好啊
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 22:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗歌背后蕴藏一个女诗人热烈而真挚的情感，这是诗人的特质。向诗人问好！！
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:27:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
是呀
我这人太实在, 谁说的话, 我都会立马相信的
Laughing

那你以后不敢相信我的话了? Smile


照信不误
下次如果你说20个情人
我还是会相信的
半溪多大的魅力呀
Laughing

我说我没有，你也相信,岂不是和你说的多大的魅力自相矛盾?
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:31:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
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哈哈。不过诗写得还是不错的。对于诗歌，心有既有。

问好少君~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:37:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
语言洗练，喜欢这种抒情叙事的方式，一并问好！
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:40:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
天淡云闲 wrote:
问好明月！最近状态好啊


云闲好，最近在忙什么? Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:46:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
诗歌背后蕴藏一个女诗人热烈而真挚的情感，这是诗人的特质。向诗人问好！！


问好海军~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 04:50:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
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语言洗练，喜欢这种抒情叙事的方式，一并问好！


问好拳上过诗友~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 06:22:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
明月原来是阿红啊
上次还要提酒呢.有意思.
不过,活着为自己写墓志铭的人只有诗人能干出的事.
见着墓志铭的诗题我都看,也不知有多少人把自己的名字刻上了墓碑.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 06:57:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
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明月原来是阿红啊
上次还要提酒呢.有意思.
不过,活着为自己写墓志铭的人只有诗人能干出的事.
见着墓志铭的诗题我都看,也不知有多少人把自己的名字刻上了墓碑.


呵呵,我将来不要墓碑,所以先写这里~
死了，一了百了,管那么多干嘛~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 05:53:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
为诗献名誉了。感动。
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