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《07年5月29日晚上,在我的稻田边》
春雨
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 05:45:02    Post subject: 《07年5月29日晚上,在我的稻田边》 Reply with quote

当蛙鸣谱写除此之外的寂静
当不圆的月亮在哄赶不安分的星星
当我为我的稻田放开进水口
当你成为此刻我唯一的听众
我要说的就是我看到了
过去时的我在我的头顶上
疯狂的在月光中沐浴 手中还在撕扯着虚伪
他的狂笑让我颤栗
那笑声瓢泼而下
我和你的往事就一件件的被洗涤
我真诚的脚印正在发霉
因为你的谎言
向你狂奔的真诚总在一个个句号之后
被你的谎言抽打得鲜血淋漓
往事都被一个个目标切割成段
目标在让人的感觉两极分化
痛饮目标咀嚼成功的感觉里
为什么有人在选择出家或者自杀
而不如愿的人们
在低三下四卑躬屈膝声嘶力竭或者歇斯底里之后
在痛苦之中挣脱就捧到了柳暗花明的果实
傲慢和卑微都是脱离本性的虚伪
狗咬过人后让人知道了
它是一种有本领的动物
在你没了声音之后我想人的感情
野外稻田里的笑声真的很简单
例如雄性的螳螂和蜘蛛
葬身异性的口中之前他们真的什么都没想
那只是一种生理的需求
可悲可笑壮烈壮观都是有思想的小丑
硬披在它们亡魂上的外套
它们为什么不去自慰
虽然后脑海的木痛和想呕吐的感觉
在互相耻笑
鸟求爱的欲望连接着劳苦
受感觉的支配时思想已无能为力
有人说那是生存的必然
当满足和失意从同一目标的两极弧奔而聚
下一步的路程也就清澈见底
现在我必须启程了,因为你的许诺

2007.5.31.21:32
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 06:29:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

稻田边让人思绪飞扬
有很好的思考

欢迎春雨带来稻田光临北美枫
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赵福治
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 07:14:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

下一步的路程也就清澈见底
现在我必须启程了,因为你的许诺
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 17:53:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

半亩方塘一鉴开,天光云影共徘徊。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 20:39:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

内容都不错就是不太顺,选词蹩嘴
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