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你和我说起了雁

野航
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Posted: 2007-05-29 15:48:12 Post subject: 你和我说起了雁

你和我说起了雁我说我见过在记不得年龄的年龄那时天还是一只锅倒扣在围窑似的山顶一大群雁从东山外飞来像一场突袭锲入孟冲的天空一个横空出世的“人“ 又伸展为独一无二的“一“ 咦呀咦呀咦呀丢下一排甜蜜的炮弹而我们才仰起头喊着：雁！雁！雁！它们已掠过西山一柄柔软的刀不断深入把天空拓展而你要我描述一只雁我说我不能那还是记不得年龄的年龄我并没有看清雁雁也并没有看到我那只是一道不期而遇的灰色闪电熄灭在短暂的童年公元二千零一年在北约克城一群雏雁在我脚尖蹒跚着长大第一场大雪前它们也写出了两个汉字飞向安大略湖０３／０１／０２野航的博客 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1248361684 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-05-29 16:02:45 Post subject:

血液是种族的内在本质，语言和文字则是种族的外在标志。尤其是文字，语言有丧失的时候，而文字不能。你在异国的天空看到祖国的汉字，情感之深切亦是平凡之伟大！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-29 19:40:44 Post subject:

一些比喻生动形象。味道不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-05-29 20:04:54 Post subject:

欣赏这种有真实情感的诗歌, 不是为写作而写作

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Posted: 2007-05-30 15:14:32 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

血液是种族的内在本质，语言和文字则是种族的外在标志。尤其是文字，语言有丧失的时候，而文字不能。
你在异国的天空看到祖国的汉字，情感之深切亦是平凡之伟大！

北岛有句诗，大意是：我走遍世界，唯一的行李是汉语
与少君所见略同啊。
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野航
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Posted: 2007-05-30 17:39:21 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

欣赏这种有真实情感的诗歌, 不是为写作而写作

幸好我们这些人进不了中国作协之类的机构，要不，免不得要为写作而写作。
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博弈
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Posted: 2007-05-30 18:35:36 Post subject:

“它们也写出了两个汉字飞向安大略湖“ 问好！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-05-31 18:55:16 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

“它们也写出了两个汉字
飞向安大略湖“

问好！

问好！你的地址ＳＦＯ，不知是何处，莫非美国圣弗朗西斯？
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