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水调歌头－抒怀

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-27 17:03:41 Post subject: 水调歌头－抒怀

忆去岁五月登本地凤凰山晨起凤峦秀，赏玩野花闲。光阴似水春瘦，却未到深山。满目清幽浓厚，滴翠风摇娇柳，人醉美图篇。远寺古铃缠，经历几霜寒？靠玉栏，流年旧，赋诗篇。丁香沁袖，雅姿绚烂展何年．贤士英豪逝后，遗悼哀亭败宙，感老怨新欢。转眼时光走，不若啸林间。

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-27 17:13:10 Post subject:

诗如泉涌,越写越好了

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-27 17:24:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

诗如泉涌,越写越好了

谢谢哥哥斧正！

我还得继续努力呢！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-05-27 17:24:43 Post subject:

人醉美图,舒啸林间,兴致盎然,欣赏学习.

晓松
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Posted: 2007-05-27 20:10:56 Post subject:

好词！把词一行行竖着排，看着更舒服，我觉得。

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-05-27 23:01:07 Post subject:

欣赏．喜结． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-28 00:28:02 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

人醉美图,舒啸林间,兴致盎然,欣赏学习.

谢谢雅正！

晓松 wrote:

好词！

把词一行行竖着排，看着更舒服，我觉得。

接受松版的建议，谢谢！

暗香如沁 wrote:

欣赏．喜结．

谢谢！

冰清
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Posted: 2007-05-28 01:04:43 Post subject:

词如其人!

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-28 11:51:49 Post subject:

我来学习。。。问好楼主。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-28 16:15:05 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

词如其人!

谢谢冰清老师鼓励！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-28 16:17:06 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

我来学习。。。

问好楼主 Cool

。

您客气了

谢谢kokho关注！

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