金金 进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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风动松柏 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2007 Posts: 197
风动松柏Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-28 00:15:46 Post subject: |
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金金 wrote: |
风动松柏,多批”)
nobody,原来你以为我是女的??!砸
品玉,问好。你名字很美 |
哈哈,开玩笑而已,我主张评. _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-28 00:18:48 Post subject: |
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金金 wrote: |
风动松柏,多批”)
nobody,原来你以为我是女的??!砸
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是啊,你用的头像是个女的嘛!哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-28 00:24:54 Post subject: |
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风动松柏 wrote: |
金金兄是一个很好的兄弟,我也用意识流手法写诗歌. |
这末多意识流,都这末现代,还有别的流。
弄得俺都不敢贴了,因为不入流。以后请你们多指点啊!谢谢。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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魏一舟 童生
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 47 Location: 湖南邵东 魏一舟Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-28 03:46:13 Post subject: |
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好诗歌,学习了呀! |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-14 23:48:20 Post subject: |
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后来者要拜访每个站的每位诗人,金金是第一位。等读完作品再说意见,先问好! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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黑牙 童生
Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 54
黑牙Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-15 00:29:35 Post subject: |
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美诗美图,提~ _________________ 有一个位置,我从来都没有找到。 |
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金金 进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-29 22:50:01 Post subject: |
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当我回家后漱口
我妈妈在屋里唱歌
我爸爸跳绳
我回头看了看关上灯
生动有趣...... |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-30 00:06:07 Post subject: |
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原来,
金金是个男性诗人
但是,说实话,你自己不说的话,
从诗歌风格,虽然,太意识流,
还是,有"很重的女性气质"
我本人,喜欢你的那首<...哈尔滨> |
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