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（原创）无韵之春早七言古体）

王晓琴
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Posted: 2007-05-27 00:41:40 Post subject: （原创）无韵之春早七言古体）

无韵之春早王晓琴昨夜千丝春风湿，今晨几株润地青。淡淡迷蒙诈薄暮，微微泥温诱蔻心。远山叠叠藏惊厥，近碧深深羞静宁。长袂解带伊消渐，短巾飘拂尔昏昏。作者：王晓琴，安徽六安市裕安区政协，邮编：237000，伊妹儿：wangxiaoqin3@126.com 电话：05643301885

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Posted: 2007-05-27 06:00:45 Post subject:

立意不错．也比较灵动．但从诗歌的角度而言，句子还可以再雕琢。问好，也欢迎光临古韵，希望多交流。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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