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反光的一面

桔子
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Posted: 2007-05-23 18:56:30 Post subject: 反光的一面

梳妆镜一个污点背对着我那里藏着什么？梳妆盒空空谁的一颗心被光阴偷走。我不再需要它但不能将它抹去。反光西湖村十六区B座三单元七楼东门门镜后面一粒苦涩的眼睛看着敲门人提着宽大的睡袋。他的梦初醒听到奇怪的声音天花板一粒药片不停地滚来滚去。楼梯间像一条阻塞的喉咙令他反胃。谎生气时她的脸异常漂亮我被迷惑，心中愧疚的虫子苏醒我知道真实需要笑出声而我甘愿接受虚伪的一面

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Posted: 2007-05-23 19:57:37 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-05-23 23:39:47 Post subject: Re: 反光的一面

桔子 wrote:

梳妆镜

一个污点
背对着我
那里藏着什么？

梳妆盒空空
谁的一颗心被光阴偷走。

我不再需要它
但不能将它
抹去。

反光

西湖村十六区B座
三单元七楼东门
门镜后面一粒
苦涩的眼睛看着
敲门人提着宽大的睡袋。
他的梦初醒听到
奇怪的声音
天花板一粒药片
不停地滚来滚去。

楼梯间像一条阻塞的喉咙
令他反胃。

谎

生气时她的脸异常漂亮
我被迷惑，心中愧疚的虫子苏醒
我知道真实需要笑出声
而我甘愿接受虚伪的一面

喜欢　：））
。
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桔子
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Posted: 2007-05-24 12:20:28 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

生气时她的脸异常漂亮
我被迷惑，心中愧疚的虫子苏醒

不错

我也喜欢后一个

桔子
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Posted: 2007-05-24 12:21:17 Post subject: Re: 反光的一面

kokho wrote:

桔子 wrote:

喜欢　：））
。

问好你

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Posted: 2007-05-25 04:56:37 Post subject:

新颖, 开阔的思路. 顶个

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Posted: 2007-05-25 13:36:07 Post subject:

西湖村十六区B座三单元七楼东门门镜后面一粒苦涩的眼睛看着敲门人提著宽大的睡袋。他的梦初醒听到奇怪的声音天花板一粒药片不停地滚来滚去。楼梯间像一条阻塞的喉咙 *描模细腻.引人思索. 问好. ZY _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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Posted: 2007-05-26 00:34:15 Post subject:

还可以“） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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