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《聚》
冰清
同进士出身


Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 00:32:54    Post subject: 《聚》 Reply with quote
《聚》

相盼年年廿日逢，
樱花着意靥儿红。
偎依牵动芝眉笑，
吟赏追琢兴味浓。
入耳孩提戏中曲，
转身遗叟步里风。
轻盈惹得群芳妒，
驻眼方知七秩翁。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 06:28:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清老师好诗连连啊
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 06:45:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
年年相盼,怀旧情深,欣赏,''驻眼方知七秩翁''一句,如果补出主语,
该是冰清兄吧,如果猜得不错,在此祝贺冰清兄高寿.
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老山
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 06:43:20    Post subject: Re: 《聚》 Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
《聚》

相盼年年廿日逢，
樱花着意靥儿红。
偎依牵动芝眉笑，
吟赏追琢兴味浓。
入耳孩提戏中曲，
转身遗叟步里风。
轻盈惹得群芳妒，
驻眼方知七秩翁。



靥儿红、芝眉笑、兴味浓、步里风——那相聚一起的“七秩翁”
多风采！“惹”事了！群芳不妒才怪哩！
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他乡客
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Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada)
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 07:30:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
年年相盼,怀旧情深,欣赏,''驻眼方知七秩翁''一句,如果补出主语,
该是冰清兄吧,如果猜得不错,在此祝贺冰清兄高寿.

同祝冰清老师高寿。 Laughing Razz Wink

见汉英字典
七秩寿辰 － seventieth birthday.
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2007-05-28 01:24:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢白水、黄洋界、老山、他乡客诸位词长!
人生难得几回聚,聚谈聚趣使我们拾起孩提的真纯,岂不美哉!
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暗香如沁
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Location: 北京
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PostPosted: 2007-05-28 05:08:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
难得啊．欣赏好诗．
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~
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