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醒着的甲虫(三首)
陶杰
童生


Joined: 24 Feb 2007
Posts: 96

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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 07:41:15    Post subject: 醒着的甲虫(三首) Reply with quote

醒着的甲虫

一只甲虫被困在盒子里
盒子扔在寝室的一角
我想这只小小的甲虫,一共承受了
一个辽阔的夜晚三倍的黑色
于是它长出牙齿和愤怒
于是它发出老鼠般的吱吱声
我躺在另一则的黑暗中
睡觉 做梦 竭力淡忘
这只比我不幸的昆虫
但是一次又一次,它用接近虚无的小嘴
悲痛地叫 狠命地咬 
一次又一次,像个疯子
撞击我薄如宣纸的睡眠
直到我打开盒子,它才不叫
也不咬,在我的头顶
它开始用飞翔的轰鸣
折磨我

2007年5月22日


绝望

妙龄少女,近在咫尺
一座果园触手可及
但她不属于秋天,她远离四季
夹在两张书桌之间,规规矩矩的样子
仿佛要把已经成熟的光芒
压入那些桌凳的木纹
一个美得快要浮起来的人
体香悄悄叛变,潜入异邦
一个男人暗自忧伤
不动声色地,咽回一声欢呼
掐灭一场大火
他的目光游过一张宽阔的试卷
徐徐爬上她的脸庞
她看不见他的绝望,他的眼里
依然保持注视一张白纸的
纯洁

2007年5月15日


傻姑

腿脚灵变的过去了
步履蹒跚的也过去了
收住脚步,绕开她
都要停住看一眼:
一个姑娘直挺挺地伫立在人流中
干什么呀
孩子要上学
大人要上班
老年人也气喘吁吁往前赶
只有她不动
傻乎乎站着 
只有她,无事可干
就像一个挡在路上的逗号
把他们
绊了一下

2007年5月16日
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 08:29:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想这只小小的甲虫,一共承受了
一个辽阔的夜晚三倍的黑色
于是它长出牙齿和愤怒
于是它发出老鼠般的吱吱声
我躺在另一则的黑暗中
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 14:11:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

就像一个挡在路上的逗号
把他们
绊了一下
欣赏!
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桔子
秀才


Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 214

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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 15:26:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

都喜欢,轻松闲适的情调.
欣赏.学习了.
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 16:36:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

是的。这首诗不错。问候诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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陶杰
童生


Joined: 24 Feb 2007
Posts: 96

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PostPosted: 2007-05-23 03:26:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢大家!多多批评! :
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