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诗一首:《送晓旭》
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PostPosted: 2007-05-17 15:44:13    Post subject: 诗一首:《送晓旭》 Reply with quote

谁替黛玉葬花魂?

似水年华伴梦深

叹去金玉堆如谷

一笑还我洁来身
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PostPosted: 2007-05-17 17:12:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

早晨听到这一消息,确实令人伤感.想起邓丽君似乎也是42岁撒手人寰.难道真如古人云:红颜薄命? 先试着和上一首,以寄哀思

《哭黛玉》

天妒红颜索玉魂,
幻游商海畏其深.
忽缘佛法从容渡,
归隐蓬莱妙真身.

注:陈晓旭生前在吉林省长春市的百国兴隆寺剃度,皈依佛门,法号妙真,立志弘扬佛法,表示要“做一名多元文化的义务教育工作者”。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-17 21:44:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

临屏一游,路过就敲几句, 不能算和Embarassed

奈何桥畔渡芳魂
此去泉台古寺深
莫道絳殊空对月
顽石永伴素洁身
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 03:34:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

楼上两位好诗!

又写了两首,也贴在这里:

明月满空山
湖畔系横船
今夜林如默
唯有雨潸潸

荷花初开放
清香遍十方
留给世人藕
悠然归莲邦
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 07:27:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

这几天都是她的消息.看着确实伤感.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 07:33:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 21:10:48    Post subject: Re: 诗一首:《送晓旭》 Reply with quote

枫华墨客 wrote:
谁替黛玉葬花魂?

似水年华伴梦深

叹去金玉堆如谷

一笑还我洁来身


好诗。同悼:
人生短暂却精彩!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 22:40:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢了,是有感而发的。
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